Disarray

Struck by chaotic lightning, 
fear of unknown fields of turmoil,
feeding my desire to break free from
the confusion I once wore like silk.

Cluttered mind full of intellect, 
dalliances of memories nourishing
all that has been sown in fields of
disarray,
for my lips are muddled, and my touch
entangled in shambles of loss.

Topsy-turvy disruption bleeds through 
the veins I carry like yesterday’s 
incoherent baggage-
and
now I am left forsaken in a state of
visceral confusion.

Lead me not to the staircase I once
climbed when youth was full of poor
grimaces;
allow me to follow the path to a 
threshold that bestows peace of mind,
relieved by all who know me-

but

that is just a dream 
and I am not
as strong as I seem


Date: 11.22.19
Contest Name: Disarray
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bialczak Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Nice!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Such a compelling eloquent piece Lu Loo, I felt that. Congratulations for your win! xomo
Na Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 4:02 AM
Congrats Lu Loo on your winning poem
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 4:35 PM
This is great Laura, glad to see it honored with a fine win!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Beautiful and sure to win top placement. I love it. God bless you sweet lady. Prayers and love for you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Beautiful rhythm and flow, LuLoo.
Aurora Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 7:49 AM
This is so good. Deep portrayal of the inner turmoil a lot of us carry around. Love it!
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