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Disarray

Struck by chaotic lightning, fear of unknown fields of turmoil, feeding my desire to break free from the confusion I once wore like silk. Cluttered mind full of intellect, dalliances of memories nourishing all that has been sown in fields of disarray, for my lips are muddled, and my touch entangled in shambles of loss. Topsy-turvy disruption bleeds through the veins I carry like yesterday’s incoherent baggage- and now I am left forsaken in a state of visceral confusion. Lead me not to the staircase I once climbed when youth was full of poor grimaces; allow me to follow the path to a threshold that bestows peace of mind, relieved by all who know me- but that is just a dream and I am not as strong as I seem Date: 11.22.19 Contest Name: Disarray Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 11/27/2019 1:02:00 PM
Nice!
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:49:00 AM
Such a compelling eloquent piece Lu Loo, I felt that. Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Date: 11/24/2019 4:02:00 AM
Congrats Lu Loo on your winning poem
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Date: 11/23/2019 4:35:00 PM
This is great Laura, glad to see it honored with a fine win!
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Date: 11/22/2019 11:28:00 PM
Beautiful and sure to win top placement. I love it. God bless you sweet lady. Prayers and love for you, Gina
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm and flow, LuLoo.
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:49:00 AM
This is so good. Deep portrayal of the inner turmoil a lot of us carry around. Love it!
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