Disarray

November 17, 2019
Disarray Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nina Permanter


Disarray (Happy Disarray) 
 
It happened one evening 
The fourth of July 
My lover went looking  
For sparks in the sky. 
 
He hadn’t been gone 
For a minute or more 
When someone came knocking 
Loud on my front door.  
 
I thought it was he,  
He had found some bright flash 
But instead, it was no one, 
Maybe ding dong and dash. 
 
I closed up my door  
Knowing it was some quack, 
When all of a sudden 
My lover came back. 
 
He had him a bottle 
Of booze and some cheese 
He sat on the step  
Then got down on his knees. 
 
He said he had something 
He wanted to say 
But his mumbling was nothing 
But loud disarray. 
 
I tried to stay calm 
Tried hard not to laugh 
But the look on his face 
It cut me in half. 
 
He had this strange look 
With a glint in his eye 
It turns out he was there 
To tell me it was goodbye.  
 
I couldn’t stand there 
With him all drunk and dumb 
So I went to the curb 
And I put out my thumb. 
 
A car came by quick  
And I jumped in the back 
I didn’t see him nor  
His disgusting ass crack.  
 
I was happy to go  
And so happy to leave 
That the rest of the night 
I wore my heart on my sleeve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/18/2019 10:21:00 AM
I guess he found the spark he was looking for but didn't expect it to explode in his face. This was fun, sad and clever, all wrapped into one. I really liked this Christine. It was fun to read.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2019 10:46:00 PM
Hi Christine I liked this. It was different and I like different. To bad for the guy, will he make me cry hell no :) lol thanks for sharing this. His loss. good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad