Disappointment Towards Me

How much it wounds my heart to know you are disappointed at me.
Even when you know my heart soaked in sorrowness.

My beloved mother never told me those words and you think you have the right to judge me without knowing the pain i bare.
God doesn't punish but does love without limits

Its not my fault Im imperfect and cant meet the high expectations of others.
If my goal was to keep everyone else happy then what kind of life would that be?

I am a deception to you and i don't expect to be perfection to others.
It hurts to know someone you love has stopped believe in the value you posses.
It wounds my soul to put value to his words of scaring judgement.

My mind and heart are full of mixed emotions.
I forgive his stubbornness and those who judge me.
The way i see it is there is a time were a person cant not meet the standards of others in which mercy with forgiveness is not shown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/12/2011 5:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Irene. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:17:00 PM
The 1st step in knowing your strengths, is to know your flaws...and do something about it. Deep writing.
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Date: 12/11/2011 11:17:00 AM
* "I LOVE THE DEPTH, QUESTIONING & TRUTHFUL REFLECTIONS I FIND WITHIN THIS HEARTFELT VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL IRENE * OFTEN I HAVE EXPRESSED MY OWN BELIEF THAT IMPERFECTION WAS CRAFTED AMID LOVES ETERNAL REASONINGS * AND IF ONE CANNOT FORGIVE, RESERVE CONDEMNATIONS JUDGMENT & LOVE UNCONDITIONALLY THEN AMID MY VIEW ALONG SIDE HEAVENS I AM CERTAIN THEN * HOW CAN THEY TRULY EXPECT THE SAME IN RETURN COME THEIR DAY OF STANDING AFORE ETERNITIES GATE * VERY STIRRING & HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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