Disappearing

   his presence
   was rather
   like a shadow
   disappearing 
   from a wall
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M  Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:04 PM
That right there BB in so few words holds such power and meaning!! Excellent! Debx
Faulkner Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:58 AM
This makes me think of my father, always just a shadow on the edge of my life, so much conveyed with so few lines, that is the mark of a great poet~
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Hmm. 'A great poet?' I wonder: Who wrote this? Must have been you! Thanks, Michelle.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Wow…
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 6:59 PM
Many thanks for the 'Wow,' Kim. Have a wonderful weekend. ~ Gershon
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