Disappeared

Without a whisper, without a hiss, you disappear, 
Disappear in the mists. No shadows, no footprints, 
Only slimy sticky lies, oozing out of dark from the slits… 
Search begins within, deep inside in the corners of words, 
Burning fears, raging soul, dusk of worlds 
Shattering mind, throwing, blaming each quote, 
Blaming each slithering drop, falling from the eyes 
Cursing, shaming love, so naïve and so wise… 
But felon love spoils it again, 
Yet again throws a dime of faith for sake
And pity frail heart follows. 
Follows the spark, the petite ray, of hope, of another chance 
And another birth to a new mistake.
And another labyrinth or twisted tale. 
Tale of trapped, thumping heart, passionate soul, poisoned mind, 
Finds the place left behind, finds a way to run behind, 
Till I hear you whisper again. 
Whisper again in my ear the same songs and talks in vain, 
Same old endless talks and dreams bygone, 
And bygone silences since you left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 11:51 PM
MANDAR, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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May 24, 2015 at 6:43 AM
- Hello new member: Mandar - Very well done, a great poem - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
Naik Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Hello Anne, Thanks for the warm welcome. Glad to be part of Poetrysoup family. :)
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Mandar, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Naik Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Hey Linda, Thanks a lot. Looking forward for making great friends here too. :)
Hopper Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Nicely done! Excellent structure. Really enjoyed your work this morning!
Naik Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Anna :)
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 2:51 AM
that is deep, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Naik Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Hey Skat, That's a warm welcome :) Thank you very much. Surely I would love to be friends with you and many hear at Poetry Soup. My name is Mandar Naik. I am from India, working with an IT company. Writing is my hobby...but every night sleep with a dream that one day I will have my poems published in the world's biggest magazines ;) well, that's about me to start with :) how about you?
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