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Disappear With a Wink

Gray clouds change the mood
As I watch them take over
The light, colorful sunset

But sunlight reaches
The edge of ominous clouds
Moving with lining of hope

Across the background
Where blue dominates the sky
Mixed emotions passing by

Light and dark transform
Rapidly as the sun sets
Blue fades to white into night

Through the trees so still
Thoughts linger in tints of pink
Then, disappear with a wink

Heidi Sands

11/27/17

5-7-7 : syllable count for the form

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Roy Pett

Date: 11/28/2017 11:35:00 AM

An excellent Choka Heidi, so well written as usual. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Roy. I appreciate your support and kind words :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/28/2017 11:00:00 AM

Beautiful! And ever-present is your positive spirit showing the light of hope through the clouds. Love the title too Happy Tuesday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 12:13:00 PM

Great to see you back Mike. Thank you for your comment on this one. Glad to hear you like it. Happy Tuesday! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/28/2017 7:05:00 AM

Beautiful Choka string of pearls, Heidi. Your imagery is outstanding ... and the message spiritually uplifting. Mighty fine poetry, dear. Love and smiles always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Freddie for all your support and kindness :)

Maria Williams

Date: 11/27/2017 9:39:00 PM

I love the imagery in this lovely Choka of yours Heidi, and your syllable count is perfect.....Maria

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 4:35:00 AM

Thank you Maria. I appreciate your comment. I hope all is well :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2017 4:54:00 PM

Enjoyed the imagery, change of mood, and the idea of thoughts disappearing with a wink, Heidi. I must try out this form one of these days. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am happy you enjoyed it and look forward to see your poem with this form :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/27/2017 4:52:00 PM

Heidi, such beautiful imagery in your wondrous write. Each stanza says something truly special but your last stanza is superbly expressed. Great write!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 5:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan. Great to hear your positive feedback ;)