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Disappear With a Wink

Gray clouds change the mood As I watch them take over The light, colorful sunset But sunlight reaches The edge of ominous clouds Moving with lining of hope Across the background Where blue dominates the sky Mixed emotions passing by Light and dark transform Rapidly as the sun sets Blue fades to white into night Through the trees so still Thoughts linger in tints of pink Then, disappear with a wink Heidi Sands 11/27/17 5-7-7 : syllable count for the form

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Date: 11/28/2017 11:35:00 AM
An excellent Choka Heidi, so well written as usual. :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Roy. I appreciate your support and kind words :)
Date: 11/28/2017 11:00:00 AM
Beautiful! And ever-present is your positive spirit showing the light of hope through the clouds. Love the title too Happy Tuesday!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Great to see you back Mike. Thank you for your comment on this one. Glad to hear you like it. Happy Tuesday! :)
Date: 11/28/2017 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful Choka string of pearls, Heidi. Your imagery is outstanding ... and the message spiritually uplifting. Mighty fine poetry, dear. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Freddie for all your support and kindness :)
Date: 11/27/2017 9:39:00 PM
I love the imagery in this lovely Choka of yours Heidi, and your syllable count is perfect.....Maria
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2017 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Maria. I appreciate your comment. I hope all is well :)
Date: 11/27/2017 4:54:00 PM
Enjoyed the imagery, change of mood, and the idea of thoughts disappearing with a wink, Heidi. I must try out this form one of these days. Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Paul. I am happy you enjoyed it and look forward to see your poem with this form :)
Date: 11/27/2017 4:52:00 PM
Heidi, such beautiful imagery in your wondrous write. Each stanza says something truly special but your last stanza is superbly expressed. Great write!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan. Great to hear your positive feedback ;)
Date: 11/27/2017 4:44:00 PM
I love the 'thoughts' line, Great write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 11/27/2017 3:48:00 PM
Imagery and emotions well articulated in this creative poem--well done, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 11/27/2017 3:34:00 PM
Well done Heidi, well done indeed...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 3:40:00 PM
Hi Charlie. Thank you very much :)
Date: 11/27/2017 3:23:00 PM
A proper choka example and a very good one.. Great imagery in this..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2017 3:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent One. I appreciate your comment on this :)

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