Heidi Sands Poet Choka

Disappear With a Wink

Gray clouds change the mood
As I watch them take over
The light, colorful sunset

But sunlight reaches
The edge of ominous clouds
Moving with lining of hope

Across the background
Where blue dominates the sky
Mixed emotions passing by

Light and dark transform
Rapidly as the sun sets
Blue fades to white into night

Through the trees so still
Thoughts linger in tints of pink
Then, disappear with a wink

Heidi Sands

11/27/17

5-7-7 : syllable count for the form

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Roy Pett November 28, 2017 at 11:35 AM An excellent Choka Heidi, so well written as usual. :)) Heidi Sands November 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM Thank you Roy. I appreciate your support and kind words :)

Mike Gentile November 28, 2017 at 11:00 AM Beautiful! And ever-present is your positive spirit showing the light of hope through the clouds. Love the title too Happy Tuesday! Heidi Sands November 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM Great to see you back Mike. Thank you for your comment on this one. Glad to hear you like it. Happy Tuesday! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 28, 2017 at 7:05 AM Beautiful Choka string of pearls, Heidi. Your imagery is outstanding ... and the message spiritually uplifting. Mighty fine poetry, dear. Love and smiles always. Heidi Sands November 28, 2017 at 7:06 AM Thank you Freddie for all your support and kindness :)

Maria Williams November 27, 2017 at 9:39 PM I love the imagery in this lovely Choka of yours Heidi, and your syllable count is perfect.....Maria Heidi Sands November 28, 2017 at 4:35 AM Thank you Maria. I appreciate your comment. I hope all is well :)

Paul Callus November 27, 2017 at 4:54 PM Enjoyed the imagery, change of mood, and the idea of thoughts disappearing with a wink, Heidi. I must try out this form one of these days. Regards // paul Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 5:04 PM Thank you Paul. I am happy you enjoyed it and look forward to see your poem with this form :)

Susan Ashley November 27, 2017 at 4:52 PM Heidi, such beautiful imagery in your wondrous write. Each stanza says something truly special but your last stanza is superbly expressed. Great write! Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 5:03 PM Thank you so much Susan. Great to hear your positive feedback ;)

Joseph May November 27, 2017 at 4:44 PM I love the 'thoughts' line, Great write Heidi Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 4:48 PM Thank you Joseph. I am happy to hear that :)

Vijay Pandit November 27, 2017 at 3:48 PM Imagery and emotions well articulated in this creative poem--well done, Heidi! Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 4:04 PM Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your comment :)

Charlie Smith November 27, 2017 at 3:34 PM Well done Heidi, well done indeed... Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 3:40 PM Hi Charlie. Thank you very much :)

Silent One November 27, 2017 at 3:23 PM A proper choka example and a very good one.. Great imagery in this.. Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 3:24 PM Thank you very much Silent One. I appreciate your comment on this :)