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Dirty Words

A young cunnilinguist in Chichester Delighted his girl as he kissed her His sweet talk was great But she could not but wait ‘Till he showed her his latest tonguetwister

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Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 8:42:00 AM

enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 9:40:00 PM

this is a cool limerick, Bas.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Limerick Fun, Limerick Crazy" contest Bas. Love, Carol

Bas Holzhaus
Date: 12/21/2012 4:34:00 AM

Thanks Carol, hope to be back soon with more.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 8:48:00 PM

Congrats, Bas. Outstanding. Kudos. Ralph

Bas Holzhaus
Date: 12/21/2012 4:34:00 AM

Thanks Ralph.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 1:22:00 PM

Bas, a super congrats in my contest... I had lots of giggles reading all my entries,..xox~pd

Mike Dailey

Date: 6/6/2012 7:12:00 AM

Nice use of rhyme - I liked the flow of this one Mike

Bas Holzhaus
Date: 12/21/2012 4:42:00 AM

Thanks Mike. And yes, I think flow/metre is essential in a limerick.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2012 8:42:00 PM

BAS, awe, i like the tongue twister taste.. awesome passionate limerick,,pd

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/5/2012 3:14:00 PM

I'm speechless... pussy's got my tongue... Terry