Dirty Love

So we came undone, stitch by stitch,
it's been far to long but the scars still itch.
Lies start to feed on a love I believed
was specifically designed and crafted for me.
Words once ingrained into our history,
scatter like petals from an over-plucked daisy.
Promised love danced on a breeze of deceit,
then lay with the trash and leaves on the street.
I almost reach down to gather it up,
to brush off the dirt, keep hold of the love.
A girl rushes by with a smile in her eyes,
steals all the love and I'm left with the lies.
I sink to my knees, embracing the ground,
I sense you beside me, you don't make a sound.
You just look so sad.
It's then that I know,
all I can do now,
is let you go.
But I know if I wait where I am, if I stay,
my heart will rupture as you walk away,
and though I am scared, shaking as I rise,
I can't let this last juncture fossilize,
into another moment where you think you win.
So I walk away first, my next chapter begins...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 1/29/2014 6:40:00 AM
† Excellent Flowing Rhyme, Bathed In A Touch Of Blue, Dear Precious Jodie ˜ So Many Layers Both Beautiful As Also Profound And Worthy To Be Faved: The Title Itself Is Intriguing ? I Love The Image Of Her Beauty Rushing By With Love In Her Eyes: Magnificent In Picturesque ˜ Love John
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