Jessica Arteaga Poet Sijo

Dirty Garden

The bed is wanting; open are the sheets waiting to seize you,
are you comfortable to lay when you know you can't get away?
Decision made, your flower will bloom in a dirty garden...

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James Fraser August 29, 2009 at 12:01 PM Terrific poem Jessica, many images to be taken from this>>James

Jim Wilson August 9, 2009 at 2:05 PM Jessica, Sijo's are a difficult form; holding that long of a line is a challenge. I think you must be a natural for this form.

Gert W. Knop August 9, 2009 at 6:57 AM I like your comparism, well written! Hope to read more. Gert

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2009 at 4:43 AM Beautifully written which can be understood in many ways. Keep writing. Sara