Dirty Art

I’m ready for a little artwork, baby, so could you grab for me a shovel and a pail? Let’s head down to the seashore. Maybe you’ll lay your body for me on the sand? I need some sand with grains of silt and clay - a little dirty - just like “sexy you!” Such grains (when mixed with water) lock and stay! With sand like that, there’s so much I can do. I’ll blend it with some water from the sea to make a castle. YOU will be the base, I’ll thickly spread that mixture wantonly along your body – stopping at your face. . . No crashing waves will sweep away my art. My castle will have barely got a start. posted by Andrea Dietrich, 5/7/2012 Now For PD's Second Chance Contest
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Watt Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 9:43 PM
Wow, way to talk really dirty, haha! I use the word 'wantonly' so rarely I had to look it up, (sad, I know) but it fit perfectly in the tone of this sexy sandcastle sonnet!
Davis Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Andrea I didn't know sandcastles could be this sexy. You painted a passionate and seductive picture for the reader Nice job Thanks for the sweet and flattering comment on my Universe poem
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Andrea. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 1:53 AM
Andrea congrats on your win..David
A   Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 1:44 AM
ANDREA.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
Song Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 7:16 PM
44 and holding.....I will send u some pics to your email and u can see the wrinkles only if u won't laff...
Kapoor Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 4:25 AM
Superb imagination Andrea and wonderful sketch of sand castle. You have made really a superb sexy castle, where the waves would be washing the walls to make the body more sexy and beautiful . My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra. ...Andrea Dietrich
Mac Donald Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 11:47 AM
This is lovely, Andrea!:) That's quite an interesting castle you be making, but within these walls is what you will cherish most! Hope you'll have a great Mother's Day...you certainly deserve this! Best wishes, Mikki
Collins Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Andrea -- where do you get that lovely inspiration? Don't tell me. love, Kathy
Maverick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Naughty Andrea.." and then there was the drunken one...I mean't poem not person.." before I get a law-suit L O L..) quite a good write as well..
Goller Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Dirty Art indeed, A lovely story poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Situation Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:56 PM
why am i thinking about murder.
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 4:02 PM
hahaha
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading..Very imaginative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 12:42 PM
wow,andie... this work has that naughty, sensual appeal to it... i like it.. girl, let;s get giddy, yes!!.. winning huggs!:)
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:36 AM
Andrea great sonnet and a great entree, I can see all the women on the beach looking for that 'special' sand ha ha.goodluck..David
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 2:24 AM
That is why I call you Sonnet Queen.Revisited this excellent write again..(you busy?)
Peranteau Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Hot lil' write here dear poet ! I'm gonna have ta send ya Soup mail Andrea. Awesome write ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james
Johnson Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Get back to work you frisky sculptor. And build it to the sky. I think you got distracted when you got up to his eye.
Austin Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 2:50 PM
Ah yes, the fingers and the words of the true artist. I can understand that with such artistic fingers your sand castle might have been left unfinished. Howsomever, your words will be eternal. Love, daver
Devnath  Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Wonderfully worded, enjoyed. Wish you all the best in the contest. Loved always, bl
Horsman Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:05 AM
there is no holding you back from diversity, is there? which of course makes you all the more special. simply unique, and a sure winner for me anyway. harry
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:56 AM
Agreed!
Horne Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:41 AM
I love this original take on the contest, Andrea - sure to be a big winner. I remember trying to 'bury' my sleeping uncle on the beach once, lol.
Susan Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:34 AM
laying out has a whole new meaning in this poem! ha ha ha ;) good luck in the contest :)
Brown Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 5:57 AM
The best to you in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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