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Dippy Doberman

My Doberman puppy's in trouble
He cocked his leg against our kitchen table
And I’d only just taken him for walkies
where he just sniffed at that manky mutt Mable

I’d let my Chester off his leash
so he could answer natures call
but not a piddle was to be seen
he preferred to be chasing a ball

So now he’s whining like a naughty child
In fact, he’s retreated onto my bed
I think he’s ashamed of his behaviour
as the sheet’s been pulled over his head!

Inspired by clip 2 using a lot of poetic licence!

Doberman Pinscher Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

7/31/18

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Sandra Haight Date: 8/21/2018 5:06:00 PM I like your take on that clip 2 video, Jan! Very sweet! They do know when they've done something wrong, for sure! Congrats on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/19/2018 8:03:00 PM This poem is so sweet Jan. I am happy to see it be placed high in second place! Congratulations my friend! : ) Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 8/18/2018 11:17:00 PM Oh this is especially cute! Congratulations on your win. Reads well and rhymes perfect. Well done! Login to Reply

Francesca Pappadogiannis Date: 8/18/2018 3:38:00 AM LOL. I loved this poem. Made me laugh. Dogs are so amazing for our health and laughter. Thank you for this poem Jan :) Congratulations on your win xx Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/17/2018 5:54:00 PM SO CUTE, Jan! CONGRATS. Janice Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/17/2018 5:04:00 PM Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Jan!:-) Congratulations on your win with this well-penned, humorous piece! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 8/17/2018 4:09:00 PM Congrats on your win, Jan. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/4/2018 11:26:00 AM Jan, this was so much fun to read, best of luck in the contest ~ Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/3/2018 5:19:00 PM Ah, the world is going to the dogs!! Thanks for the laugh, Jan! :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/3/2018 5:24:00 PM lol clever comment GW:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/1/2018 5:04:00 AM So very cute and entertaining as only you can deliver. A delight, Jan. I briefly considered the doberman contest, but staring at my four cats, I came up with nothing. Miss you. Hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/1/2018 5:48:00 AM I don't have any pets CayCay so just thought of a silly reason why the dog was whining lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/31/2018 3:08:00 PM Brought back memories of our spaniel Jan. They can be like a naughty child without a doubt Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2018 3:29:00 PM Thanks Tom, I'm not a doggie person, prefer cats but as I'm allergic to animal fur I have no pets:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 7/31/2018 1:20:00 PM Quite the visual Jan...reward him for pottying outside Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2018 1:40:00 PM Thanks Tim - a fiction write of course lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith Date: 7/31/2018 11:42:00 AM Don't talk about Mable like that... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM oh Mable is unstable lol - am sure there is a limerick there lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael Date: 7/31/2018 10:08:00 AM A nice write of puppy love...What is DP complaining about...he's on a bed and not outside in the dirt...All the best Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams Date: 7/31/2018 7:44:00 AM I like this a lot Jan! Well written and easy to imagine in my mind. Well done!..........80) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/31/2018 7:49:00 AM Thanks Pat, the clip is just of the dog whining and rolling on the bed so I thought I'd weave a poem around why he is sulking lol:-) hugs jan xx