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My Doberman puppy's in trouble He cocked his leg against our kitchen table And I’d only just taken him for walkies where he just sniffed at that manky mutt Mable I’d let my Chester off his leash so he could answer natures call but not a piddle was to be seen he preferred to be chasing a ball So now he’s whining like a naughty child In fact, he’s retreated onto my bed I think he’s ashamed of his behaviour as the sheet’s been pulled over his head! Inspired by clip 2 using a lot of poetic licence! Doberman Pinscher Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 7/31/18

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Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2018 5:06:00 PM

I like your take on that clip 2 video, Jan! Very sweet! They do know when they've done something wrong, for sure! Congrats on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/19/2018 8:03:00 PM

This poem is so sweet Jan. I am happy to see it be placed high in second place! Congratulations my friend! : )

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/18/2018 11:17:00 PM

Oh this is especially cute! Congratulations on your win. Reads well and rhymes perfect. Well done!

Francesca Pappadogiannis

Date: 8/18/2018 3:38:00 AM

LOL. I loved this poem. Made me laugh. Dogs are so amazing for our health and laughter. Thank you for this poem Jan :) Congratulations on your win xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/17/2018 5:54:00 PM

SO CUTE, Jan! CONGRATS. Janice

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/17/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Jan!:-) Congratulations on your win with this well-penned, humorous piece!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/17/2018 4:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Constance La France

Date: 8/4/2018 11:26:00 AM

Jan, this was so much fun to read, best of luck in the contest ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2018 5:19:00 PM

Ah, the world is going to the dogs!! Thanks for the laugh, Jan! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2018 5:24:00 PM

lol clever comment GW:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/1/2018 5:04:00 AM

So very cute and entertaining as only you can deliver. A delight, Jan. I briefly considered the doberman contest, but staring at my four cats, I came up with nothing. Miss you. Hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 5:48:00 AM

I don't have any pets CayCay so just thought of a silly reason why the dog was whining lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/31/2018 3:08:00 PM

Brought back memories of our spaniel Jan. They can be like a naughty child without a doubt Good luck. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I'm not a doggie person, prefer cats but as I'm allergic to animal fur I have no pets:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/31/2018 1:20:00 PM

Quite the visual Jan...reward him for pottying outside

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Tim - a fiction write of course lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/31/2018 11:42:00 AM

Don't talk about Mable like that...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM

oh Mable is unstable lol - am sure there is a limerick there lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/31/2018 10:08:00 AM

A nice write of puppy love...What is DP complaining about...he's on a bed and not outside in the dirt...All the best Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 7/31/2018 7:44:00 AM

I like this a lot Jan! Well written and easy to imagine in my mind. Well done!..........80)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Pat, the clip is just of the dog whining and rolling on the bed so I thought I'd weave a poem around why he is sulking lol:-) hugs jan xx