Dippy Doberman

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My Doberman puppy's in trouble He cocked his leg against our kitchen table And I’d only just taken him for walkies where he just sniffed at that manky mutt Mable I’d let my Chester off his leash so he could answer natures call but not a piddle was to be seen he preferred to be chasing a ball So now he’s whining like a naughty child In fact, he’s retreated onto my bed I think he’s ashamed of his behaviour as the sheet’s been pulled over his head! Inspired by clip 2 using a lot of poetic licence! Doberman Pinscher Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 7/31/18

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Date: 8/21/2018 5:06:00 PM
I like your take on that clip 2 video, Jan! Very sweet! They do know when they've done something wrong, for sure! Congrats on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/19/2018 8:03:00 PM
This poem is so sweet Jan. I am happy to see it be placed high in second place! Congratulations my friend! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 11:17:00 PM
Oh this is especially cute! Congratulations on your win. Reads well and rhymes perfect. Well done!
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:38:00 AM
LOL. I loved this poem. Made me laugh. Dogs are so amazing for our health and laughter. Thank you for this poem Jan :) Congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:54:00 PM
SO CUTE, Jan! CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Jan!:-) Congratulations on your win with this well-penned, humorous piece!
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan.
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Date: 8/4/2018 11:26:00 AM
Jan, this was so much fun to read, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 8/3/2018 5:19:00 PM
Ah, the world is going to the dogs!! Thanks for the laugh, Jan! :) gw
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Date: 8/3/2018 5:24:00 PM
lol clever comment GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/1/2018 5:04:00 AM
So very cute and entertaining as only you can deliver. A delight, Jan. I briefly considered the doberman contest, but staring at my four cats, I came up with nothing. Miss you. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/1/2018 5:48:00 AM
I don't have any pets CayCay so just thought of a silly reason why the dog was whining lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 3:08:00 PM
Brought back memories of our spaniel Jan. They can be like a naughty child without a doubt Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I'm not a doggie person, prefer cats but as I'm allergic to animal fur I have no pets:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 1:20:00 PM
Quite the visual Jan...reward him for pottying outside
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Tim - a fiction write of course lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 11:42:00 AM
Don't talk about Mable like that...
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Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM
oh Mable is unstable lol - am sure there is a limerick there lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 10:08:00 AM
A nice write of puppy love...What is DP complaining about...he's on a bed and not outside in the dirt...All the best Jan
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Date: 7/31/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 7:44:00 AM
I like this a lot Jan! Well written and easy to imagine in my mind. Well done!..........80)
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Pat, the clip is just of the dog whining and rolling on the bed so I thought I'd weave a poem around why he is sulking lol:-) hugs jan xx
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