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Dipping With Vast Sunset

And  this boundless moment arrives
For  late noon’s sunset to drop its glimmer--
In  one final hour, the immense ray succumbs
Clutching with it  a vastness, brilliant;

And the hue of  moonshine daintily peeps,
That through sky’s tableau, a portrait hangs low
While this juncture between  daytime and evening
Invites me to render a prayer of hope,

As the red-gold sundown  chants mildly
From its final dip  to hum: “ Radiate within!"
Upon the prologue of  a time, I ache ;

For sunset’s immense beauty      vanishing
Red- orange like a mantle, widespread,
Now all flushed under city quay's bed
Leaving  me in tears as it slowly drowns.






Broken Wing's Form V - Verse Me A Poem
10/2/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 12:08 PM
A moving poem filled with beautiful images Nette.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your great win with such a beautiful poem on sunset.
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem !
Callus Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:19 PM
You wear words like a golden necklace, Nette...they sparkle in their deliverance! I love the imagery, and I'm especially touched by the final stanza. Hugs // paul
Sivey Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:18 AM
I can feel the emotions oozing out my pours with this deep emotive write my friend! I am in awe of its splendor by it's powerful words of wonder this morning! I loved this piece, Great Work!!
Michelle Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:46 AM
Such a gripping title and it holds onto you all the way through. I definitely agree with everyone else here, such a great write! Love, Juli-Michelle
Sergi Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:04 PM
A beautiful poem full of emotion with the vanishing of the sunset. BONA FORTUNA!
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Beautifully written and filled with emotion. Good luck in the contest Nette :)
Ashley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Spectacular poem Nette in its imagery and emotion building up to your extraordinary last line wondrous glory. Love it and enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! :)
Casto Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:53 PM
I usually watch sunset after a day's work. It shows me how light transforms in darkness, and vice-versa. This to me is a masterpiece of a poem tender, vulnerbale, excellent!
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:51 PM
- There's nothing like a beautiful sunset to end a lovely day :) - A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:15 PM
A lot of lovely imagery in this poem--words move emotion--best for a win, nette!
One Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Not only does this have great imagery, it is a beautifil emotive deep poem..
Lalion Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Tremendously inviting me to sunset-gaze and reflect on its beauty. This verse mirrors your poignant diction!
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