Dinosaur Dodoitsu #1

Dinosaur Dodoitsu #1
(Just a hypothesis… smiles.)

Early in Earth’s History,
Toxic gases floated here.
Methane ratio was too high,
But God had a plan.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
January 24, 2010

Poetic form:  Dodoitsu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 24, 2010 at 3:44 PM
You're really getting all of these various forms, Dane Ann. (Being a bit ignorant, I thought a "dodoitsu" was a type of dinosaur, you know --- an extinct creature like the dodo bird. But lo and behold, it's a verse form!! And you're on a roll, my dear. Love, Carolyn
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