Dino Story - Nursery Rhyme

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Three dinosaurs – big, and small, and medium
        Went to the park to play, with their mom.
        Mommy told them to follow the rules,
        No fuss, whatever fun game their plan is!
                   
                                                As usual, the medium one wasn’t happy,
                                                He had to wait for his turn – he was grumpy.
                                                The little one goes up and down the slide,
                                                The gentle eldest never fails to guide.

       Swing and slide, water and mud,
       Oh My! Little dinosaurs had all kinds of fun!
       Let’s go home now – mommy says,
       Tummy growling, yummy lunch waits.

             
                                      April 20, 2021
                                       FIRST PLACE
                       Nursery Rhyme 5 Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/19/2021 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute Nursery Rhyme and picture. Kids will love it. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 5/19/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Love writing for kids!
Date: 4/25/2021 7:21:00 AM
This is SO cute Mala... Children would surely love the little dinosaurs swinging and sliding and playing... Congrats on your win dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 4/24/2021 4:16:00 PM
This is just adorable, Malabika. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/24/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Really appreciate your kind words. Your nursery rhymes are so cute! Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/24/2021 1:17:00 PM
Mala a lovely simple poem for the children under 7! well done! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 4/24/2021 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Krish. This is a new adventure for me - with little kids. Enjoying! Appreciate your inspiring comment. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/23/2021 8:22:00 PM
Malabika, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/24/2021 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. You have started a new adventure for me in the kids’ world! Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/23/2021 7:55:00 PM
Mala, this is such a cute story! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/24/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I am really enjoying this lovely genre of writing for children. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/23/2021 3:19:00 PM
An exciting and fun day at the park, and a yummy lunch after. What could be better? Congratulations, Mala, on your well deserved win, with this rhyme that's sure to delight. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 4/23/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. Really appreciate your loveliest comments. Nursery Rhymes are fun, aren't they? Warm wishes ~ Mala
Date: 4/23/2021 6:56:00 AM
Hi Malabika, I enjoyed your tale about dinosaurs. I'm sure children will too. Congratulations on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/23/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. I enjoyed yours too! Eve's contest is bringing out a lot of lovely poems for kids. Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 4/22/2021 11:02:00 PM
Oh, this is so cute!!!! Congratulations dear Mala on another splendid win!
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Date: 4/23/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Friend. We all are enjoying writing nursery rhymes - lots of fun! Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/22/2021 5:40:00 PM
'Swing and slide, water and mud.' Sounds like a kids delight, doesn't it? (Even if it's a mother's fright). They are dinosaurs, after all... :) gw
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/22/2021 5:49:00 PM
I know kids very well - they love water and mud more than swing and slide!!! And dinosaur-moms are moms after all! Warm wishes ~ Mala
Date: 4/20/2021 11:06:00 AM
Hello Mala, they got hungry so wanted to go home for lunch. Like this poem. Love Darlene and friendship.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2021 3:51:00 PM
Hello Mala, I am sure that your kids would like it. I can just picture the children readinf this poem. Love and friendship. Darlene
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Date: 4/20/2021 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Hope the kids like it! Love ~ Mala
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