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Dinner Party

Across the murdered meals, cigarettes stabbed here and there into sorbet, bits of chocolate flake cake, he will start to relate their story, but she will- t-t-t- and tell it over the uncleared plates, coffee spills, to others shiny eyes and the eager nods of her friends- Until he didn’t know her or how they had begun.

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Date: 2/24/2022 8:41:00 PM
Superbly written! There is so much tension here in this edgey dinner party that breathes estrangement. To me, fine poetry indeed. Cheers, Brian
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Douglas Brown
Date: 4/13/2022 1:38:00 PM
Thank so much Brian!
Date: 11/24/2021 9:31:00 AM
Creative lines you have penned in this one. I can see a broken relationship that ended very unhappily. I hope all is better now. Sara
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Douglas Brown
Date: 4/13/2022 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Sara. Luckily not autobiographical!

Book: Shattered Sighs