Dinner Manners

Quietly waiting
at the table
legs swinging…
Then, Aunty Jean 
brings in
green soup.

Mother-glares at me,
sister-stares with me
at the cold green soup.
Is it medicine,
pond slime, 
mushed frogs?
...at least twenty 
spoonfuls long.
Silently I say, “Ugh!”

Quietly waiting 
at the table…
Aunty Jean brings in
passionfruit cheese-cake,
cream dessert.

Is it more slime,
frog spawn,
tadpole eyes...?

Oh no, it’s a giant slice.
I take one bite…

“Oh,” says Uncle Ron,
“Don’t you like it?”

“Not really,” I murmur.
 
“All the more for me,”
He smiles,
turns goggle-eyes,
leans across,
adds my slice to his.

Cauldron bubbling,
mixture squelching
sauces oozing
gases belching…

“A glass of milk?”

“Yes please, I’d like 
a glass of milk.”

“...and a chocolate frog?”

“No,
No thank-you,
Aunty Green.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Cornish Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Truly fun and giggle-worthy and...a cleverly artful write!
Swan Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Memorable event, glad you enjoyed. J :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:08 AM
LOL! A lot of fun but not for the kiddies!
One Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Loved this one..
Swan Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Partly true story of childhood! Glad you enjoyed it. J :)
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