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Dinner Manners

Quietly waiting at the table legs swinging… Then, Aunty Jean brings in green soup. Mother-glares at me, sister-stares with me at the cold green soup. Is it medicine, pond slime, mushed frogs? ...at least twenty spoonfuls long. Silently I say, “Ugh!” Quietly waiting at the table… Aunty Jean brings in passionfruit cheese-cake, cream dessert. Is it more slime, frog spawn, tadpole eyes...? Oh no, it’s a giant slice. I take one bite… “Oh,” says Uncle Ron, “Don’t you like it?” “Not really,” I murmur. “All the more for me,” He smiles, turns goggle-eyes, leans across, adds my slice to his. Cauldron bubbling, mixture squelching sauces oozing gases belching… “A glass of milk?” “Yes please, I’d like a glass of milk.” “...and a chocolate frog?” “No, No thank-you, Aunty Green.”

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Date: 3/26/2024 9:08:00 AM
LOL! A lot of fun but not for the kiddies!
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Date: 3/12/2024 4:44:00 PM
that green soup sounds just awful...reminds me of cold green pea soup that someone in my family made. I'd almost puke trying to eat it...but always had to remember 'manners, manners.' Anyway, this was a delightful story and read. have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 3/14/2024 12:48:00 AM
Yes! I think it was fashionable at the time. Strange how my kids would've just left it on the table. (Smarter than me). J :)
Date: 3/12/2024 12:38:00 PM
Loved this one..
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 3/12/2024 12:50:00 PM
Partly true story of childhood! Glad you enjoyed it. J :)

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