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Dinner For Two

cool clear chilly night the moon glows so big and bright... the owls out tonight circling in the sky bats swerving so way up high... the hooter's- now fly golden eyes in trees flapping wings soar in the breeze... dinner for two, please A Haiku Collection of Three Nature Themed Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 10/1/2022 *(Howmanysyllables.com)

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/27/2022 9:15:00 AM

Love this Charlie. Dinner's on! :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/8/2022 5:41:00 PM

Ah, nature imagery for an autumn evening. I can follow these night creatures in my mind's eye so clearly. Well done! Cheers, Brian

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/7/2022 2:57:00 PM

Ah, but this is so well-done, Charlie... and btw, that's how I'd like my steak (well-done). Perfect penning here. ~ Gershon

Deb M

Date: 10/6/2022 2:32:00 AM

Lovely cute poem Charlie….Enjoyed….Debx

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2022 3:09:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. Charliex

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/5/2022 3:36:00 PM

Best wishes, Charles!i truly like these! Pangie xx

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2022 3:10:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie! xx

Michael Tor

Date: 10/3/2022 11:26:00 AM

Charlie what a great collection I love how you tied each one together. The imagery was great I could see clearly your words of these feathered friends. Like how the title throws you off until the end. Clever and wonderful to read. Reminded me when we went to Pinebush one Year is was kind of Erie and the owls you could hear, it added a different dimension to everything. God bless you Charlie really liked these Haikus. A favorite my friend...

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2022 3:13:00 AM

Thank you, Michael. It's not often when you see these feathered friends, but when we do it is truly an Erie feeling. Thanks for favoring this one. God Bless...Charlie

Bill Baker

Date: 10/3/2022 7:23:00 AM

Love you collection of three Haikus entry, Charlie. While written and flow together well. Good luck in the contest, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2022 3:15:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. I appreciate your comments. My wife's family all live in Texas (near Arlington) Your poet friend from New Jersey, Charlie