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Dinner

Breathing in the decay I paused with trepidation As a chill crept upon me tonight Odourous and thick A suffocating feel of nothingness devoid of light The claws they were jagged and bitingly cold As they circled around my neck The slow caress as he lifted me high to look... to see... to... I am not sure... I was left dangling in pause as he took stock of me; up and down. He lowered my body to the base of a tree Gone when he swirled around. The gravel did groan And fly out of place as the grass bent in the wind But gone he was, clawed stench to beyond A world, a realm, an abyss. My neck was inflamed Choking me again as I sat unable to move. And through the shadows a terror did 'rang' eyes glued to focus through. Mist, it had settled, opaque undefined.. swirling became obtuse And then jagged lines crossed though the pale to exact the flesh it should Warmth aflow, in my neck it did stow, the claws from the start of the tale Return with might to hide the sight of the monster on the trail. The smooth caress as he lifted me high and drank from the bones in my neck I watched from the sidelines a shimmering mist as my life was reduced to this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/24/2018 10:57:00 AM
Ahhh, many goosebumps! Now, I'm hungry...but, I feel I shouldn't be??? :) This was awesome! Cheers!
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/24/2018 11:26:00 AM
Go eat, savour the morsels, do not deny thy pleasures of the soul. Wicked and tempting. Glad you enjoyed me.
Date: 10/23/2018 3:38:00 PM
I can imagine there are a few Samhain contests presently. Is this for one of them? I love it
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/24/2018 11:59:00 PM
Not this one. Pure pleasure as they all are.. except the Choka. Ahhhh! Its a bit tedious and should probably rhyme.
Date: 10/23/2018 11:53:00 AM
All I can say is don't set a place for me, I don't think I will be attending this dinner. : ) Creepy and definitely chilling. Nicely done.
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/23/2018 4:18:00 PM
Delicious
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 12:11:00 PM
What do mine look like? Medium rare. : )
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/23/2018 12:00:00 PM
I thought it was light hearted. Kind of tongue in cheek humour, perhaps not. Shanks will be on the menu, however, if you change your mind. Ahhh, what do yours look like? Asking for a friend.

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