Dinner

Breathing in the decay 
I paused with trepidation 
As a chill crept upon me tonight

Odourous and thick
A suffocating feel of nothingness 
devoid of light

The claws they were jagged 
and bitingly cold 
As they circled around my neck

The slow caress
 as he lifted me high 
to look... to see... to...

I am not sure...
I was left dangling in pause 
as he took stock of me; up and down. 

He lowered my body 
to the base of a tree 
Gone when he swirled around. 

The gravel did groan
And fly out of place 
as the grass bent in the wind

But gone he was, 
clawed stench to beyond
A world, a realm, an abyss.

My neck was inflamed 
Choking me again 
as I sat unable to move.

And through the shadows 
a terror did 'rang'
eyes glued to focus through.

Mist, it had settled, 
opaque undefined.. 
swirling became obtuse

And then jagged lines 
crossed though the pale 
to exact the flesh it should

Warmth aflow, 
in my neck it did stow,
the claws from the start of the tale 

Return with might 
to hide the sight 
of the monster on the trail. 

The smooth caress 
as he lifted me high 
and drank from the bones in my neck

I watched from the sidelines
a shimmering mist 
as my life was reduced to this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Tacito Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Ahhh, many goosebumps! Now, I'm hungry...but, I feel I shouldn't be??? :) This was awesome! Cheers!
Tapestry Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Go eat, savour the morsels, do not deny thy pleasures of the soul. Wicked and tempting. Glad you enjoyed me.
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 3:38 PM
I can imagine there are a few Samhain contests presently. Is this for one of them? I love it
Tapestry Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 11:59 PM
Not this one. Pure pleasure as they all are.. except the Choka. Ahhhh! Its a bit tedious and should probably rhyme.
Green Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:53 AM
All I can say is don't set a place for me, I don't think I will be attending this dinner. : ) Creepy and definitely chilling. Nicely done.
Tapestry Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Delicious
Green Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 12:11 PM
What do mine look like? Medium rare. : )
Tapestry Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 12:00 PM
I thought it was light hearted. Kind of tongue in cheek humour, perhaps not. Shanks will be on the menu, however, if you change your mind. Ahhh, what do yours look like? Asking for a friend.
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