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Campanologist
forgets to let go the rope
His face rings a bell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pepper Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Doesn't make any sense its just u trying to be classy
Guzzi Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Hi Bill #1 this is not a haiku. Here help on trying to write a haiku do not be discoraged it took me 2 years to write a bad haiku! # 2 even a good haiku can not compare in my estimation to the longer forms. I do not care at all for short forms, but if it had been a haiku you would have still gotten into the top 10. http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist -
Pepper Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:29 AM
how tf u spend 2 years writing a poem
Guzzi Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 3:43 PM
The word Campanologist would not be used in a haiku. haiku are meant to be sensory and "as simple as porridge". I hope this helps. Light & Love
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