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Dine Out 'Pon Good Food

dine out 'pon good food
salad soup entre' dessert
chocolate molten cake

getting dressed for date
all my pants shrunk at cleaners
lie down to zip up  

Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico
Contest: "What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown"

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Lee Ramage Date: 8/30/2012 11:06:00 AM I know we live in different areas of North America, but I think I go to the same cleaners...;-) Lee Login to Reply

Erich Goller Date: 8/29/2012 8:43:00 PM To much good food will make your pants seem to small. A lovely Senyu with an touch of humor. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 8/28/2012 5:46:00 PM This made me chuckle. I can definitely see the smiles and the frowns here Mrs. Sara. Thanks for sharing such a creative senryu, and best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/28/2012 12:55:00 PM lol, yes, my trousers are always shrinking too. Love your sense of humour, Sara. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : ) Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 8/28/2012 10:42:00 AM It's a funny Senryu, enjoyed tasty pon good food. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/27/2012 9:15:00 PM hahaha, that last one is funny, Sara. Well, I'm done. I just went down the new poems list and saw lots more, but now it's time to finally eat!!'Goodnight! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/27/2012 7:27:00 PM What a stupendous and awesome write my friend! You wrote an incredible poem Sara! You showed me a great smile, and a sad frown! You should do well in the contest! Fabulous piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 8/27/2012 7:04:00 PM Good food is only good when we can burn up the calories it has without us gaining any weight. With chocolate cake, that takes an awful lot of exercising. Good double entry senryu. Login to Reply