Sara Kendrick Poet Senryu

Dine Out 'Pon Good Food

dine out 'pon good food
salad soup entre' dessert
chocolate molten cake

getting dressed for date
all my pants shrunk at cleaners
lie down to zip up  

Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico
Contest: "What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown"

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Lee Ramage August 30, 2012 at 11:06 AM I know we live in different areas of North America, but I think I go to the same cleaners...;-) Lee

Erich Goller August 29, 2012 at 8:43 PM To much good food will make your pants seem to small. A lovely Senyu with an touch of humor. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Tim B August 28, 2012 at 5:46 PM This made me chuckle. I can definitely see the smiles and the frowns here Mrs. Sara. Thanks for sharing such a creative senryu, and best of luck in the contest.

Jack Horne August 28, 2012 at 12:55 PM lol, yes, my trousers are always shrinking too. Love your sense of humour, Sara. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Bl Devnath August 28, 2012 at 10:42 AM It's a funny Senryu, enjoyed tasty pon good food. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2012 at 9:15 PM hahaha, that last one is funny, Sara. Well, I'm done. I just went down the new poems list and saw lots more, but now it's time to finally eat!!'Goodnight!

Russell Sivey August 27, 2012 at 7:27 PM What a stupendous and awesome write my friend! You wrote an incredible poem Sara! You showed me a great smile, and a sad frown! You should do well in the contest! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit August 27, 2012 at 7:04 PM Good food is only good when we can burn up the calories it has without us gaining any weight. With chocolate cake, that takes an awful lot of exercising. Good double entry senryu.