Dimension

Our dimension 
is one of constant change

realization almost immediately
gone, at the point of capture

all we know is in retrospect -- 

floating on a buoyancy of grace,
faith, a divine contract -- 
written in seasons
the journeys of stars

feelings the truth we call life:
weeps and joys of nature~
God, the knowable and unknowable,
translator and ever greater mystery….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 8:10 PM
I felt the truths and spirituality of this poem.
DiMino Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Hilda; blessings my friend.
Rodgers Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:47 PM
Dear Joe, your poem beautifully encapsulates the fluidity of existence and the ever-shifting nature of our reality. The imagery you use, like "floating on a buoyancy of grace" and "the journeys of stars," evokes a sense of wonder and awe at the mysteries of life. I love your contemplation of feelings as the truth we call life and the portrayal of God as both knowable and unknowable add depth and complexity to your reflection. This is a thought-provoking exploration of existence and spirituality. - Blessings, Daniel
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your encouragement and insight into this work. Blessings my friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 1:01 PM
- In truth; many wonders, Joe - Lovely written :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Each of us a miracle. Thank you, Anne.
Kulkarni Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:26 AM
A lovely write with a deep meaning Joe! Loved the last two lines a lot! Enjoyed reading it! -Smita
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, Smita; so pleased you enjoyed this read. Blessings my friend.
Empress Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Dear Joe, what a meaningful write this is, soulfully divine and well articulated. I love the flow of this and how youve phrased, “ faith, a divine contract -- written in seasons “ so deep and true. “God, the knowable and unknowable, translator and ever greater mystery…” I agree. I absolutely love the way youve written this in a very moving manner. Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you light
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, IE; you made my day! Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Much depth in this verse, Joe. Your exploration into the mystery and mystique of being, makes the reader pause and reflect.
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Vijay; for your continued encouragement and support. Blessings.
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Just beautiful, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:38 PM
I could not ask for a better comment. Thank you, Andrea. Blessings my friend.
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