Dimension

Our dimension is one of constant change realization almost immediately gone, at the point of capture all we know is in retrospect -- floating on a buoyancy of grace, faith, a divine contract -- written in seasons the journeys of stars feelings the truth we call life: weeps and joys of nature~ God, the knowable and unknowable, translator and ever greater mystery….

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/14/2024 8:10:00 PM

I felt the truths and spirituality of this poem.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/15/2024 7:41:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda; blessings my friend.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/14/2024 2:47:00 PM

Dear Joe, your poem beautifully encapsulates the fluidity of existence and the ever-shifting nature of our reality. The imagery you use, like "floating on a buoyancy of grace" and "the journeys of stars," evokes a sense of wonder and awe at the mysteries of life. I love your contemplation of feelings as the truth we call life and the portrayal of God as both knowable and unknowable add depth and complexity to your reflection. This is a thought-provoking exploration of existence and spirituality. - Blessings, Daniel

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:34:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel, for your encouragement and insight into this work. Blessings my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2024 1:01:00 PM

- In truth; many wonders, Joe - Lovely written :) - hugs

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:35:00 PM

Each of us a miracle. Thank you, Anne.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 3/14/2024 11:26:00 AM

A lovely write with a deep meaning Joe! Loved the last two lines a lot! Enjoyed reading it! -Smita

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:35:00 PM

Thank you, Smita; so pleased you enjoyed this read. Blessings my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/14/2024 9:23:00 AM

Dear Joe, what a meaningful write this is, soulfully divine and well articulated. I love the flow of this and how youve phrased, “ faith, a divine contract -- written in seasons “ so deep and true. “God, the knowable and unknowable, translator and ever greater mystery…” I agree. I absolutely love the way youve written this in a very moving manner. Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you light

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, IE; you made my day! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2024 8:58:00 AM

Much depth in this verse, Joe. Your exploration into the mystery and mystique of being, makes the reader pause and reflect.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay; for your continued encouragement and support. Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2024 8:43:00 AM

Just beautiful, Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2024 3:38:00 PM

I could not ask for a better comment. Thank you, Andrea. Blessings my friend.