Dilettante With a Want

With vast logolepsy, I bleed my shaken pen on vacant paper. Ready to howl without opening my mouth as it's locked. My sheet catches human salt water while I ooze out my head's vapor. The odor of my consciousness's dew finally sticks onto each sentence - albeit it was mocked. Because I'm a dilettante with a want for the transparent screaming to be blocked. ~ Written On: July 24th, 2017 Contest: The Sound Of Pages In The Night Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Won: 12th Place
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Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 3:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem entered in my contest..Thank you for your participation..Sara
Lorette Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Okay... I am not sure what your poetry was about, I just know that i liked it. Have a nice day my friend.
Lorette Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Thank you, Darlene. That's the beauty of poetry; it can at times bring upon an emotion without knowing the true meaning. It's up to the reader to find the definition of the text. I wanted to bring that in my writing and I'm glad you felt that way. :)
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July 24, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Wow! Love your use of language... "My sheet catches human salt water while I ooze out my head's vapor", all of it, awesome! :)
Lorette Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Thanks, Maureen for your comment! :)
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