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Dilemma

There was the hunger and suicide. In favor of my brutal truth or virtue of my failure, I do not want any comments on my trauma. Morality has a dubious equation with power, provoking my anger. The days were full of abandoned kilns. No more shaping of containers in which one can put the moon, and honey and roses. Everything was turning brown with infinite, sulphur smelling teeth ready to bite into golden flesh. Convicts behind the walls were playing with mirrors to throw the light on slick towers. Death was laughing, waiting on the trees, eating black berries. And I was forced to taste the blood of sky with sodium – in sanctum sanctorum. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/15/2009 5:50:00 AM
This is a powerful poem with thought provoking imagery. Loved the analogies and structure. congrats Satish! Randy
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:15:00 AM
Congratulation on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/11/2009 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Satish. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:50:00 AM
Really powerful, well deserving to be featured this week. Congratulations. :) Love, Amy
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:09:00 AM
congratulations Satish on the featuring of your poem "Dilemma." Power and greed are two of the people's greatest enemies. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:03:00 PM
Very thought-provoking write here Satish and an excellent choice by the Soup to be featured this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:02:00 PM
Satish - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 6:13:00 PM
Satish - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:54:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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