Charlie Smith Poet Free verse

Dijon Fantasy -Uc Contest Yellow Picture 4

The water, cloaked in the mist of a yellow dawn,
    Summoned souls to the shore of beguiling dreams.
    Sail true, My pilot, My hope,
    Into thy Dijon Fantasy.




    Written 3/3/2016 For U/C Contest  Yellow Picture 4

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:25 PM Charlie Smith, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA Charlie Smith March 14, 2016 at 11:33 PM Linda I hope you were able to see the painting. That I had to use for inspiration for the piece. It makes mor sense seeing it. Thanks for the compliment. CWS

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 12:01 AM Congratulations Charlie on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Charlie Smith March 6, 2016 at 6:24 AM Very kind of you to say Hans, I hope you enjoyed the piece...

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2016 at 2:26 AM Charlie, your entry is eloquent and very deserving of your top placement! Congratulations! #7 Charlie Smith March 5, 2016 at 6:13 AM You are most kind, thank you Connie

Sathya Babu March 5, 2016 at 12:52 AM Many congratulations on your WIN Charlie.....:-) Charlie Smith March 5, 2016 at 6:12 AM Thanks you very much Sathya

Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 5:17 PM very creative take on the theme many congrats on your win Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 5:34 PM Hugs accepted, Thank you so much Jan

Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:00 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest, Charlie :) Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 5:29 PM Let's just keep doing this, you and I. Thanks, Dear

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 4:12 PM Charlie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 4:21 PM Many thanks luloo

Charlotte Puddifoot March 4, 2016 at 3:49 PM i like your use of the word 'dijon' in this verse - congrats on your win in the contest! Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 4:16 PM You're very kind Charlotte, thank you..,

Sandra Haight March 4, 2016 at 2:41 PM Wonderful imagery, Charlie. I enjoyed your poem and how you interpreted the prompt. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 2:53 PM I loved the inspiration. Thanks for your kindness, Sandra, it's most appreciated.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 4, 2016 at 1:42 PM Enjoyed very much this poem Charlie. My best wishes for the contest. Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 1:47 PM Thanks for sharing your time and your wishes with me...

Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:39 AM Charlie, this is beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~ Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 6:15 AM Thank you Broken Wings, you're most generous...

Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 12:14 AM This a very creative take on the visual that I truly enjoyEd, Charlie. Best of luck in the contest:) Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 12:29 AM Thank you for your support. Thi is so very important to grow yout craft. A kind word goe's a long way...thanks Laura