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Different Flames

Different Flames

Remembering when I was bold
Hard to believe we got this old
The flames from fire,warm us tonight

It started with a friendly wink
Fueled by courage from my drink
The flames of passion,burning bright

Laying together in our bed
Nothing really needs to be said
The flames of life,drift out of sight




LIGHT A FLAME! Contest/Nette Onclaud
by Greg Hoffman
6/13/2014

Copyright © Greg Hoffman | Year Posted 2014

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Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 7/3/2014 11:20:00 PM Beautifully penned. A loving message to this read! Thank you for sharing! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 7/5/2014 9:30:00 AM Thank you and thanks for your comments

Casarah Nance Date: 6/23/2014 8:37:00 PM A hot poem, you have really lit up the page with your words, from warmth to burning to extinquished well done Greg :) Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/28/2014 9:34:00 PM Thanks again for the good words

Robert Lindley Date: 6/22/2014 12:58:00 PM Congrats on a fine win!!!! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/22/2014 7:21:00 PM Thank you very much

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/21/2014 6:17:00 PM the cycle of love and marriage. Very nicely done. Congrats. Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/21/2014 7:04:00 PM Thank you very much and thanks for commenting

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/21/2014 11:15:00 AM The variations of your flames outshine us all:) kudos! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/21/2014 1:29:00 PM Thank you very much and congrats on your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/21/2014 5:49:00 AM Greg a wonderful write ,, congrats on a very merited top place ! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/21/2014 10:42:00 AM Thank you very much and thanks for commenting

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/20/2014 10:49:00 PM Your Welcome Greg for the reply Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 6/20/2014 6:05:00 PM Greg, beautiful writing. Congratulations on your first placement. Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:09:00 PM Thank you very much and thanks for the comment

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/20/2014 4:52:00 PM Congratulations, Mohan, on your great, big win! What a wonderful wrtie - way to go, my friend, turning the flames of love real high! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:16:00 PM No problem,thank you very much Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/20/2014 7:44:00 PM Hi Greg, please forgive the typo above where I inserted the wrong name. This congratulations was meant for you. I have been having some computer issues so please forgive me..

Jan Allison Date: 6/20/2014 3:03:00 PM congrats on a superb win. Hugs jan x Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:22:00 PM Thank you very much

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/20/2014 2:39:00 PM just right in mood and sentiment.. the creative stretch you took with this one.is admirable.. cheers on your win in my challege, greg!.. huggs Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:29:00 PM Thank you very much,I really liked the topic of your challenge.Can't wait to give your next one a try,thanks again

Mark J. Halliday Date: 6/20/2014 1:51:00 PM Congrats on a fine write. MJH Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:32:00 PM Thank you and congrats on your win

Arlene Smith Date: 6/20/2014 12:54:00 PM Congrats Greg on an awesome win! Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:41:00 PM Thank you and thanks for commenting

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/20/2014 11:58:00 AM congratulations Greg on the well deserved win. Mohan Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:21:00 PM Thank you very much and same to you on your win

Skat A Date: 6/14/2014 12:48:00 PM Hi, Greg, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT" Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:41:00 PM Thank you for the warm welcome

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/13/2014 11:48:00 PM Greg, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:39:00 PM Thank you for the warm welcome

Casarah Nance Date: 6/13/2014 8:15:00 PM ooh awesome! Well done applause, hope to see this one on the winners list!! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/20/2014 10:37:00 PM Thank you very much,and thanks for being the first person to comment on anything I wrote.