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'...the thorn in sharpened shade weathers all loneliness.' -Hart Crane Branches scratch the sky blanching the twilight pale and grey, the day is dying; my way is dark and dismal, the night jar's distant cry my only solace as I wander washed in reveries of you and wish with all my heart it could be different. (Note: an exercise in alliteration and assonance... short 'a,' long 'a,' long 'i,' short 'i,' short 'o' assonance. 'b,' 's,' 'd,' 'w' alliteration. Poetry is music... similar sounds and a deliberate rhythm.)

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Date: 2/17/2016 8:26:00 AM
Very well done.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Richard... much appreciated! Keith

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