Judith S Poet Rhyme

Different

Unfurling your fingers like petals in sun
I look at your palm and scream what have you done
There beating my heart you have ripped from my chest
I knew you’d be different from all the rest.

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Written 6/8/2018


For Contest:    When a 4th Line Helps It To Rhyme
Sponsor:         Silent One

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Gordon Mcconnell November 7, 2020 at 12:00 PM Nice piece Judith, really powerful and uplifting too. Keep spilling the ink!

Lewis Raynes September 16, 2018 at 9:12 PM Such a lovely beautiful write Judith, I enjoyed reading through this about six times, so nice. loved it. ...btw congratulations on the win :)

Faraz Ajmal August 1, 2018 at 10:03 AM Ahh, this poem is really beautiful and it has a immense impact on reader's mind, I see that it has won a contest, so many congratulations on your well deserved win, it is indeed a beauty and certainly a joy to read, good luck and have a really nice day

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 5, 2018 at 1:35 PM Very intimate write, Judith. A tastefully done reveal. Love and smiles always.

Winged Warrior June 29, 2018 at 11:10 PM A gripping write my friend...congrats! on your win Judith...love & light...^WW^

Susan Ashley June 26, 2018 at 9:31 PM Wow! Judy, your poem is as emotionally powerful as it is poetically beautiful. Such captivating and intense imagery in so few lines. A dramatic and excellent write. Belated congratulations on your wonderful win my N.E. friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2018 at 10:24 AM wow, this one has an impact!! Congrats on your win , Judith.

Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:46 PM Wonderful write, Judith !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 7:28 AM Congratulations for your win Judith :)

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2018 at 7:14 AM Congratulations Judith. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 7:13 AM - Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Judith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One June 13, 2018 at 6:59 AM Sounds like love to me... Great first line Judy.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Tom Cunningham June 12, 2018 at 2:12 AM Nice four liner Judith, but sad too. Tom

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2018 at 4:24 PM Well done Judy..wonderful depiction of love-interest in just a few words.

Mike Gentile June 11, 2018 at 12:11 PM Great one Judy, Take your heart back and move on xxoo

Arturo Michael June 11, 2018 at 11:21 AM He took it...so what are you going to do...Nice one...All the best Judith