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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Diet Setbacks

Self-discipline whines
discounting hefty losses...
Demanding dessert




***For Nayda Ivette Negron Setback Contest
July 10, 2016

Copyright © Natalie The Rogue Rhymer | Year Posted 2016

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July 13, 2016 at 5:35 PM

Congrats Natalie, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Reason A. Poteet

July 11, 2016 at 5:53 PM

Music to the ears of this Weight Watcher member currently a little up. Over the last five years, I consistently lose the same 5-10 pounds on maintenance. An enjoyable brevity read.

July 11, 2016 at 4:58 PM

Felt the humor and pain - easy to relate. Congratulations on your impressive 10th place win in the Setbacks contest! Jesse

Sara Chansarkar

July 11, 2016 at 1:05 PM

So real and effortless,this is a setback for many,congrats Natalie!

July 11, 2016 at 10:29 AM

Nice Natalie...I believe the only true Senryu I have read on the list so far.

Beautiful Scars

July 11, 2016 at 10:11 AM

Natalie, haha love this! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

July 11, 2016 at 10:03 AM

Haha, love the last line... Nat....awesome win...Skat

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

July 11, 2016 at 8:25 AM

Congratulations Natalie on the placement of the Setbacks contest.

July 10, 2016 at 9:08 PM

...and boy can those desserts be demanding.....well done

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