Die Love Thy Looks

Die love thy looks
She isn’t a pretty face inside a reckless tent 
She isn’t a princess dice, only you could flip once
With a voice of an angel all men are angles 
Drawn by the scent of her perfume 
‘‘I PREDICT’ she is a poison to their feet’s

Oh daughter of mine 
Let not these scumbags fill their bags
With a taste of your descent kiss
0r a word of your passionate mind

You worth more than just gold and diamond
‘‘listen to your voice’’
‘‘Listen to your light
Don’t let it die young like that

There is a prince just for you my niece
He will cross by in time
He will love you not for looks 
He will find you inside your books 
Die love to those men, who don’t have shame
Thy looks are not yours to stare at
A good man will come her way someday 

Die love to those grumpy fools, who forsake their wives
For just a look.... look aside she’s just a child
Not even your size
Oh! How wicked you men have turned!
Oh! How swallow you have fallen
Find yourself before you die in this shameful dirt
Where you stand....
‘‘Die love, thy looks! End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/22/2013 8:30:00 PM
Hello Sindiswa, looks that kill... I don't know, why but I absolutely think this poem is beautiful in a dark way. .. i had chills from the first line to last, every time you mentioned the word die.. I was drawn to your way of expressing the wicked way of the men... and plus... always~ SKAT ~.
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Sindiswa Mhlanga
Date: 8/24/2013 5:00:00 AM
Hie skat,im honoured by your admiration to my expression,it gives me the motivation to keep writting...so thnk you,i haven't read all your poems but some and it seems like you've been doing this ''i dont'' maybe more than i,well i wuld love to know more about you inspite of writting if you dont mind.cheers
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