Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Did You Know

Did you know when you 
say my name.... 
butterflies gather in my
belly to play tag?
Do you know the thought
of you brings goosebumps 
to my warm flesh and chills 
ride through my very being?
Did you know when I get a 
message from you, I smile 
from ear to ear ?
How I can't help but hold 
back a giggle in delight 
like a school girl?
Did you know that the 
face of my fantasy has your 
face, the lips that kiss me 
are your lips, and the warm 
breath upon my skin 
is yours, it's all yours?
Did you know my thoughts are
of you each morning and my 
dreams at night?
Do you know what this is 
I feel because I've never felt 
anything like this before?
I just needed to know.......
if you knew?

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Pratap Roy January 5, 2020 at 10:43 PM Very well written, Brenda. Liked it. God bless you. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 12:15 AM Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it!;)

Ann Foster November 3, 2019 at 11:49 PM So sweet, so romantic... lovely words. Ann Brenda Chiri November 4, 2019 at 12:54 AM Ann thank you so very much!;)

John Fleming October 31, 2019 at 10:27 AM I know I often comment on your rhyming prowess...but you do compose Free Verse as well as anybody, Brenda -- Lovely poetry!! Fondest thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 7:34 AM Ah thank you so much John! I know I love your comments!;) my warmest affection!;)

Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 8:31 AM I am sure the lucky fellow knows what you feel and think of him, Brenda...but as often happens, a person likes to have confirmation! Sounds like love is in the air! Regards // paul Brenda Chiri October 30, 2019 at 11:37 AM Thank you so much Paul but I'm looking for him lol????

Pace Ink-U-Script October 30, 2019 at 6:48 AM Did you know when I read this poem I felt each line? Did you know the feelings you’ve shared were that of mine?....hmmm...did you know? Sorry, I couldn’t help myself. I can be straight forward at times expressing myself like I just did. That poem of yours brought it out of me. You captured the essence of the beginning stages of lust and love in one piece. Really enjoyed it!!! INK Brenda Chiri October 30, 2019 at 7:16 AM Thank you so much Ink! And did you know i love honesty above all else? ANd did you know I simply loved your comment so please don't stop because of me but did you know you had me mesmerized with your comment;) I enjoyed reading you comment more than I did my poem? Shhhh don't tell anyone one! Thank you so very much ink I do appreciate your visits no matter how how far and few between they are! Your pen is quite a talented one indeed! Now I must go read some more of you!;)