Did They Really Drag Them By Their Hair

FROM CAVE TO GRAVE

I mean if you stop to think about it and the factors involved
Love must be basically the same since man has evolved
Maybe before they could speak they silently pointed to their heart
And putting a pair together is worse than to split them far apart

So I’ll continue on my primary course of primate acts
It can be dangerous or beautiful and those are the facts
they were spurred on by the way  Marge looked at men
She had a scale for her beauty which far exceeded ten
 
It was easy to introduce them with a courteous “how do you do?”
As easy as going in a cage with lions at the zoo
Because people often mistake desperation as being dumb
It’s akin to thinking you’re drinking sweet tea while it’s really rum

You are going to need nails, caulking and a whole lot of glue
And yes………… I’m talking to you 
You……. who thought putting them together was so damned smart
You……… the one who put them together so now re-build them part by part

Love is in one’s fingertips that eases the partner to relax
Love is not only the lips, oh and  you might also need some tacks
And when you can’t do it yourself just give up frustratingly
Because these are your friends so hey, don’t ask me
      © 2011.……Poefree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/27/2012 10:53:00 AM
congrats on feature for your wonderful poem....Patrick
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:05:00 PM
another 7 brah....Sorry about all the incidous cracker rapping or what I have TMarked "INSIDIOUS Kracker Wrapping" It's all in good fun...now and then or never.---I have added you to my Short List of Favorites in this Stew of mediocrity (A.K.A. "Soup") You are detailed, witty, deep, and PROFOUND...to me. and I ain't Feces Pieces on a Stick. But that's ok. ~JSL Esq.
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:53:00 PM
"primary course of primate acts dangerous or beautiful those are the facts" "people often mistake desperation as being dumb akin to thinking you’re drinking sweet tea while it’s really rum" TWO best slices of this pie for me, tho' I do lie but don't try pie ya' see, so I dew-DO in flies eye's in port-o potties and cry at guys with my frisbees, Love kid's but hate Walt DiSS-knee, so don't Quiz me, Cuz Micky Mouse aint a G. cuz he's in the Wrong Biz B...drum Rolll PLeAse....OK...Now DISS ME!
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:09:00 AM
Very clever and extremely creative Jeff.. luv the cave man reference in the beginning and Marge Simpson connotation..luv.. your last four lines ..well luv is my thing.. my fav subject in life and have lots in my life .. lots of deeper meaning in those last four lines luv.. thanlxx for your comment on my ORCHID.. yes our planet is environmentally challenged .. but one day it will turnaround.. and we will again enjoy this planet as it was originally created .. like EDEN..
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:00:00 AM
yes another good effort but perhaps less so tha n the other two.......just my opinion though.....bestwishes...Syd
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