Did I Laugh a Little Too Loud

Did I laugh a little too loud?
	Did I show my love a little too much?
Was I a little too sensitive?
	Or, did I come across a little too rough?

Were the times we spent together 
	not enough to grow your trust?
Or was the thought of knowing too little much better than, 
	to know a little too much?

Judgment is a reckless beast when there is not enough love to spare.
How can there ever be friendship when we have limits on how much we care?

It is said where there is the Spirit of the Lord there is freedom,
	of this I know is true.
For when your heart is doubtful and troubled, just seek to share the endless love
	of Him in you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Braun Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 1:57 AM
I am blessed, and thank you. Glory be to God.
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:46 PM
a beautiful and spiritual poem, Martin.
Braun Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Wow! Thank you!!!
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