Diary Intimate Entries

Most intimate entries written upon blank pages; a confessional within them releasing emotions to a forgiving Lord. Quote _ by Poet I write upon a blank page of my diary, Loving warm desires neath the umbrella Whiled honeyed rain fell all around; Looked into hungry eyes. Perched and drenched on a tree bough a red robin spied On quenched by a rainstorm of French kisses. Our brief dates were short, realizing he misses Being together. I do sneak outside; A feeling of warm butterflies Excites fluttering round, Didn't attempt to deny desire for my fella. My hand rests on my recorded story. I listen to please music notes get me teary, Dancing round feeling like Cinderella With my fella, a love I've found. Sleepy romantic skies Look down upon me, my diary alongside, Till the balmy night's quintessence ceases. 1/31/2021 My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France abcdef fedcba abcdef 12/10/8/6/12/10 syllable lines each stanza
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Y. Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Hi Eve, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is excellent _Constance
Agustin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Wow! Congrats! This brings nostalgic moments, ending with hopeful bliss. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.
Brul Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Very well-written. The last two lines are amazing!! Congratulations Eve!!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Congrats to you with this beauty. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Poteet Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Well-done, Eve. You are a poet of many genres...this is very diary-delightful. Congratulations on your placement.
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 10:10 AM
This is done excellently, sending you winning wishes. It did capture my heart so its a winner already Eve. xo
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 6:25 PM
As poetic a diary entry as ever I've read. Just love the last two lines. So intimate and relaxed. Wonderful poesy, Eve! Kudos, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:57 AM
You write poetry that always flows my friend, this one is no exception - it was awesome reading intimate romantic secrets within your diary. This is a definite win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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January 31, 2021 at 11:55 AM
I see this high on the list Eve. A diary can be such a wonderful gift to one’s self. This is beautifully expressed. Blessings Richard.
Y. Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 7:59 AM
WoW! Eve, What a wonderful entry for the contest. Thanks for showing us a glimpse inside your diary. What you shared was romantic. You wrote this with such and ease; you made it look easy; I know first that it's not. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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January 31, 2021 at 3:55 AM
Lovely poem. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win - with love and prayers, Gina
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 3:18 AM
Great write Eve, flows like free verse. I find this form tough. Take care, Hugs Rama
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January 30, 2021 at 10:45 PM
Having tried this form, I must say I find it quite difficult. I think I'll post it tomorrow. Won't rate high like yours. Your poem is so smooth and well written. Best for a win. ~~
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