Diary Intimate Entries

Most intimate entries written upon blank pages; a confessional within them releasing emotions to a forgiving Lord. Quote _ by Poet I write upon a blank page of my diary, Loving warm desires neath the umbrella Whiled honeyed rain fell all around; Looked into hungry eyes. Perched and drenched on a tree bough a red robin spied On quenched by a rainstorm of French kisses. Our brief dates were short, realizing he misses Being together. I do sneak outside; A feeling of warm butterflies Excites fluttering round, Didn't attempt to deny desire for my fella. My hand rests on my recorded story. I listen to please music notes get me teary, Dancing round feeling like Cinderella With my fella, a love I've found. Sleepy romantic skies Look down upon me, my diary alongside, Till the balmy night's quintessence ceases. 1/31/2021 My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France abcdef fedcba abcdef 12/10/8/6/12/10 syllable lines each stanza

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Date: 2/15/2021 9:58:00 AM
Hi Eve, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:12:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is excellent _Constance
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Date: 2/15/2021 6:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! This brings nostalgic moments, ending with hopeful bliss. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.
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Date: 2/15/2021 5:10:00 AM
Very well-written. The last two lines are amazing!! Congratulations Eve!!
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Date: 2/15/2021 3:06:00 AM
Congrats to you with this beauty. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/14/2021 1:43:00 PM
Well-done, Eve. You are a poet of many genres...this is very diary-delightful. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 2/3/2021 10:10:00 AM
This is done excellently, sending you winning wishes. It did capture my heart so its a winner already Eve. xo
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Date: 1/31/2021 6:25:00 PM
As poetic a diary entry as ever I've read. Just love the last two lines. So intimate and relaxed. Wonderful poesy, Eve! Kudos, Gershon
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:57:00 AM
You write poetry that always flows my friend, this one is no exception - it was awesome reading intimate romantic secrets within your diary. This is a definite win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:55:00 AM
I see this high on the list Eve. A diary can be such a wonderful gift to one’s self. This is beautifully expressed. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 1/31/2021 7:59:00 AM
WoW! Eve, What a wonderful entry for the contest. Thanks for showing us a glimpse inside your diary. What you shared was romantic. You wrote this with such and ease; you made it look easy; I know first that it's not. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/31/2021 3:55:00 AM
Lovely poem. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win - with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2021 3:18:00 AM
Great write Eve, flows like free verse. I find this form tough. Take care, Hugs Rama
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Date: 1/30/2021 10:45:00 PM
Having tried this form, I must say I find it quite difficult. I think I'll post it tomorrow. Won't rate high like yours. Your poem is so smooth and well written. Best for a win. ~~
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