Kurt Ravidas Poet Choka

Diamonds and Sylvia Plath

tiny diamonds, 
like two tamed supernovae, 
in earlobes; a shiny 
forehead which would do 
to powder; Sylvia Plath
bookmarked with my love letter

31.o8.2019
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 7 5 7 7

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Gershon Wolf September 4, 2019 at 6:37 PM If I could understand this, that would make me an actual poet or something. Had to give it a try when I saw the title on your list.... Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ gw

Georgia Kereopa September 4, 2019 at 4:18 PM Congratulations Kurt, loved the bookmark

Constance La France September 3, 2019 at 3:49 PM Kurt, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this fine Choka poem, well done ! Kurt Ravidas September 4, 2019 at 4:29 PM Thanks, DH. God bless you and your contestants)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2019 at 1:02 PM - Congratulations on your win, Kurt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee September 2, 2019 at 12:19 PM I love them both too. Congrats on your win Kurt.

Brenda Chiri September 2, 2019 at 11:19 AM Congrats on your win!;) Kurt Ravidas September 2, 2019 at 1:28 PM Thanks, Brenda) P.S.: There is an approach in computer science theory - LIFO (last in, first out), when the last one is processed first. In this sense, I'm a winner, indeed, - the first last winner)

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2019 at 6:15 PM awww, this one is darling! Kurt Ravidas August 30, 2019 at 7:01 PM Thank you, Andrea. I do hope to see you in the contest too)