Diamonds

And now the trickles ripple rifting
through the hues of the sky—confetti!
The words of my mouth are paintings;
a projected splash all over—frantics!
Whether they drag down God's face
blaze out streamlights—candlelights
pin a billion sunrises into a stiffened day.
How over-good—worthless crystallites?

When they fall on mangrove skies;
borrowed zephyrs compress—upsize;
explode into sands of mustard seeds—ripe!
Germinate tons of thorns—stars—torn
prickles—squeals—resounds—muted cries;
the act of the hands, when they try and try
to seal the width and pit of the mouth—'unrise'
head's cap size—safeguard the crown—discrown.

How over-good—worthless crystallites?
The River births—your River mouth—'silverlites'
the tributaries—tributes—waterfalls —silver bird—
the screeching lines—over-stretched verse;
voice box machines—the echoes—out loud;
on the stainless-steel wall—a still pass
into dwindling star flaps—eyes lashed
How over good, all these worthless crystallites?


© Destiny Izehi, 2016.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/4/2016 9:04:00 PM
You have a lot of creative phrases here, Destiny. If you can maybe put them into a more understandable idea, this could be a very strong poem. I understand you may be going for "stream if thought". Just a suggestion :)
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:34:00 AM
Thanks so much... I'll try.
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