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Looking into the eclipse lost alone sharing my soul

Seagulls rush inland crying birds gathering on the highest peaks perching then silence takes hold as darkness envelopes Today watching the eclipse all alone crowning someone special warm inside deep thought hope a thousand miles away grace of beauty tears drop in a silent wish Held within breathless whispers deeply a cold breeze blowing kiss dark mixing with light in a harrow crescent as the moon moves in front sparkling diamond smiles sunshine thoughts of sharing love Sad memories drifting clouds pulling deeply tides turn angel rays brightly sparkling treasure feelings inside the ocean swells warm waves hand of a greater being touches one glowing dream unrhymed trycet

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 9:36:00 AM

Great poem. Liam I visited your page today because I had a feeling you were experiencing some pain. I am going through a rough patch right now. Thank God I got my daughter back into rehab. After 11 months she relapsed. I did not find out until three months later. It took me a long difficult month to finally convince her she needed to get help again. I want you to know that I have a strong feeling that you are about to start a new chapter in your life. A positive new time. A Fav!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/6/2015 4:07:00 AM

yeah my heart is not full maurice full of love yes but deeply hurt by someones actions whom i loved dearly god be with your daughter she is in my prayers i can relate in the demons of addiction in my niece thanking his holiness she has chosen a new route my path dear friend is a long road as i am deep in prayer that the truth will shine in the end passing you a warm smile pal

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2015 7:27:00 AM

beautiful write tinged with sadness - really love it

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 12:39:00 PM

yeah jack sadness holding love deeply free from hate wonderful comment wishing you a blessed week

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/26/2015 10:17:00 AM

Beauty all over your poem. I enjoyed!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 12:27:00 PM

ah njeri your so sweet thank you kindly wishing you a blessed week

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/25/2015 11:18:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and a feeling of great hope to overcome the sadness...hugs, Rhonda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 12:02:00 PM

hope is always the light that holds the tunnels end smiling thank you rhonda for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed week

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2015 10:20:00 AM

Amazing write my very dear friend, Liam! I thoroughly enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! I'm sorry for coming late! Belated happy St. Patrick's Day as well to you ( I almost forgot 'cuz of relentless pressure of work at school. I'm sorry) Have a blessed day to you and your loved ones/family! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 11:39:00 AM

ah leonora never be sorry always a pleasure your beautiful comments not on line as much these days myself wishing you a blessed week passing you a warm smile thank you

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/23/2015 6:40:00 PM

profound poem dear friend love it hugs 7

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 11:03:00 AM

always a pleasure to see you linda sending you a warm smile thank you dear friend

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/23/2015 1:34:00 PM

Hello Liam, you sure covered a lot of ground description wise here, and I think it will take a lot to eclipse this write Hey..'great work mate..

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:54:00 AM

hi joe yeah the eclipse held me in the deep gravity of truth wonderful heartfelt comment bless you dear friend

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 8:50:00 AM

liam, your poem is very visual with a haunting loneliness, a perfect 7 rating from me and thanks so much for visiting my poem, weeping . . .

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:41:00 AM

so very true your words but in the loneliness love dwells a faraway dream shines wonderful comment dear friend wishing you a beautiful week

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/23/2015 8:26:00 AM

Every word is lovely! Beautifully written

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:35:00 AM

thank you so kindly anna deeply appreciated

Eve Roper

Date: 3/23/2015 8:25:00 AM

I always enjoyed sitting on the sandy beach and watching the seagulls fly around the fishing boats and watch the waves come in such a wonderful soothing feeling. Love your poem. Blessings eve

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:31:00 AM

blessings to you also eve yeah love listening to the seagulls cry deeply laments flow over the deep ocean sings mixed with waves a song of beauty thank you kindly dear friend for the truly beautiful comment wishing you a lovely week

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2015 11:34:00 PM

Lovely imagery, my friend. Love how you brought the recent eclipse into it.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:22:00 AM

ahh thank you andrea looking at the eclipse i just penned my thoughts wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Tim Smith

Date: 3/22/2015 5:22:00 PM

Beautiful penned my friend...cheers Tim

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 10:20:00 AM

thank you tim dear pal wishing you a lovely week beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/22/2015 5:11:00 PM

This poem is innovative, captivating and three dimensional in character. Good word choices moving the reader with their impact. Emile.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/30/2015 8:04:00 AM

ah thank you emile your so kind dear friend wonderful comment wishing you a beautiful week

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/22/2015 4:20:00 PM

I love how there is always a beautiful positive ending in your poems even after an eclipse of sad memories-Beautiful

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/29/2015 12:50:00 PM

why dwell in the darkness charmaine when the light of beauty always shines at the tunnels end love always smiles excellent comment dear pal deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2015 2:51:00 PM

- A deep and beautiful poem my dear friend Liam - The beauty of life is what happens between the waves .... and the clouds :) - Diamond smile and a 7+ // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/29/2015 12:47:00 PM

life always holds beauty in each awakening day to see the sunlight a deep gift the eclipse smiled inside a dream wonderful comment anne lise wishing you a blessed sunday pal

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/22/2015 2:11:00 PM

Hi Liam! Such a very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just dazzling! Love it!Another diamond from your pen! A huge 7 +++ from me! A very romantic passionate positive love poem filled of warmth beautiful love dreams and hopes to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. Awesome piece! Enjoyed! Powerful imagery! Very deep and profound. Truly a mighty golden pen! Wishing you the best in everything! To me you're always the best Liam! So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet! Wishing you a very lovely evening!In his light! God bless you always! :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/29/2015 12:44:00 PM

thank you dorian dear pal for the very beautiful comment in his light bless you deeply appreciated