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Diamond Smile

Walking on hailstones I see you: a smile, a ‘Hi’ Dancing on diamonds 7 February 2021 Contest: Valentine’s Senryu Sponsor: Tania Kitchin [My own poetic license sees ‘Diamonds’ as two syllables.]

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Date: 2/11/2021 8:31:00 PM
This is so good, Terry, congratulations on your win. Eve
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/12/2021 12:41:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Glad you liked. Terry
Date: 2/11/2021 5:09:00 PM
this is so pretty! Congrats on the win, Terry
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Date: 2/11/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, very much appreciated. Terry
Date: 2/11/2021 1:06:00 PM
Ahh!! I hope those diamonds were not too sharp a cut. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:45:00 PM
Nah, I was wearing hobnail boots :-) Thanks for popping by Sara. Terry
Date: 2/10/2021 2:08:00 PM
Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet poem!
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/10/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Tania.
Date: 2/10/2021 11:04:00 AM
- Congratulations so much on your shiny winning poem, Terry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I’m usually a rhyme and Limerick kinda guy so it’s nice to get the nod for something not my norm. Thanks again, Terry
Date: 2/10/2021 6:35:00 AM
I like this one a lot Terry. Great contrast with the hailstones and diamonds. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/10/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Linda. First and third lines just jumped into my head... but, boy, did I struggle with the middle line? Glad it worked for you. Terry

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