Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Diamond In Black

With broken wills...and poisoned pills
Darkness groomed with a long black vale
With shimmering shadows...like a rusty rose
Twinkling in twilight with colors pale

Glimmering glows...from head to toes
The blackness runs through veins
Starlit smile...only lasts awhile
Only the shining silence remains

Sparkling speckles of light...is why I write
Dark matter oozing from a black hole
A Black Diamond...like a singing siren
Within the depths of the Soup Bowl.


Aug.05.2016
Black Diamond - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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John Hamilton August 21, 2016 at 11:49 PM Nice write and congrats on the win, loved the internal rhyme gets me every time , see I did it too! Sparkling speckles, twinkle twilight, just great writing.

Wendy Rycroft August 16, 2016 at 8:39 AM congrats well done xxx Winged Warrior August 16, 2016 at 9:48 AM Thanks again my friend Wendy...^WW^

Wendy Rycroft August 13, 2016 at 9:59 AM Congrats on this great poem well written xxx Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:22 AM Thank you Wendy...god bless...^WW^

Beautiful Scars August 13, 2016 at 3:35 AM WW, this is my favorite entry of them all! Very deep and raw, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:21 AM Thank you so much luloo...always nice to have visit my friend...god bless...^WW^

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 12, 2016 at 6:35 PM Congratulations Winged Warrior on the placement of the contest Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:20 AM Thank you Nayda...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison August 12, 2016 at 5:12 PM A dark poem on the black diamond theme - but its a real gem! :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:20 AM Thank you Jan...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. August 12, 2016 at 4:56 PM Hi WW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thank you Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. August 11, 2016 at 12:30 AM Hi WW, This is good take on the contest them. You write and you write well. It doesn't matter if it's dark or not because you have a way with that pen. Great job.I wish the best in the contest- 7:-) Alexis Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 9:01 AM Thank you so much Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Wendy Rycroft August 10, 2016 at 8:17 AM Well written back diamond x Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 9:01 AM Thank you Wendy...god bless..^WW^

Nette Onclaud August 6, 2016 at 5:50 PM what a strong poem highlighting how a diamond can be dark with psychedelic imprunts, WW... huggs Winged Warrior August 10, 2016 at 2:44 AM Thank you nette...god bless...WW

Vladislav Raven August 6, 2016 at 3:25 PM Hi WW, a deep and excellent poem on the theme of the contest. Dark it may be but there is nothing wrong with dark. Poetry comes in oh so many different colours and different shades of light and dark. I love the content of this write. It flows so easily down the page, the rhythm flowing well. Your words so easily take us into the heart of your vision. this has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Winged Warrior August 6, 2016 at 3:57 PM Thank you Vladislav...with all these lightful comments...the darkness is slipping away...oh no come back lol...god bless...^WW^

Kelly Deschler August 6, 2016 at 1:59 PM There is nothing wrong with having a little darkness in your writing. It may not be the most popular style of poetry, but you must stay true to yourself... I know this all too well... Always keep writing, WW. This poem is really beautiful and I love the rhyming in it!! Winged Warrior August 6, 2016 at 2:13 PM Thank you so much Kelly...the darkness is always there...but you my friend are one of those Sparkling Specks of Light...thanx for understanding...and god bless...^WW^

CayCay Godwin August 6, 2016 at 8:04 AM To me, this is a catchy poem - the rhyme and flow appeal from beginning to end as the content shines. Love it ... CayCay Winged Warrior August 6, 2016 at 9:57 AM Thank you CayCay...always a delight to have you visit my friend...go bless...^WW^