Diamond Dust, Devil

into the mysterious Cloud Water Valley haunting echoes of dead ashes filling the voids of empty hearts lies a soulless spirit -------------- A Transformed Valkyrie from once a beautiful maiden sweet voice giving Elixir of life conquering the hearts of many knights.... falling for One -------------- A King of Hearts holding the legendary sword "Diamond Dust" a warrior on the outside, a lover on the inside eloquent poet of the Arabian Nights.... love tugs at his heart -------------- A Wild Violet she never knew he belonged to the Devil dark eyes stalking, blood tongue licking.... anticipation calculating approaches, planting tactics towards their ends --------------- The Devil in Disguise clutching the soul to her falling heart in her hands ---the knight's grey ashes light turned dim in her eyes.... from sparkles to cloudy.... from gloomy to darkness there she lost her soul, becoming a Valkyrie ......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/23/2014 5:36:00 PM
Hi once again Lily :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/8/2014 2:07:00 PM
Lily, thank you for the comment on my comment... Linda
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:51:00 AM
Lol..... nice one Linda ;) Have a nice day!
Date: 5/29/2014 6:49:00 PM
LILY, , EPIC WRITE, EPIC WIN.... CONGRATS... LUV ~LINDA
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 6/4/2014 10:30:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thanks so much for the support and kind comment ;) All the best!
Date: 5/28/2014 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Lily
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 6/4/2014 10:29:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, Thanks for your kind comment ;) All the best!
Date: 5/28/2014 7:12:00 PM
LILY,, Congrats---- thank you for supporting my "Diamond Dust, Devil" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/4/2014 10:29:00 AM
Hi SKAT, Thanks for the opportunity to write in your contest ;) All the best!
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