Sue Mason Poet Diamante

Diamante Iii

Enemy
                           hostile foe
                    hating, harming, loathing
                War, Armageddon, Peace, Amity
                 loving, giving, understanding
                         warm supportable
                             Friend

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Carrie Richards February 13, 2009 at 10:58 AM Thanks Sue, for your comments (every one!)...and to answer your kind question....my b-day is 5/21 ....you are so thoughtful to keep track of all our birthdays!! :)

Michael Jordan February 11, 2009 at 3:54 PM Sue I have never even seen this poetry form but I reckon you wear it well - I enjoyed reading your poem Sue - God Bless you and those you love - YF4L - MJ

Barbara Gorelick February 11, 2009 at 1:51 PM Both of your Diamantes are great..i have never tried this form but you make me want to give it a go. BG

Carrie Richards February 11, 2009 at 1:16 PM Another excellent job, Sue!! You are so good at this form!! :) ~ love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins February 11, 2009 at 12:17 PM I love this form..great imagery throughout the piece.

Michael Degenhardt February 11, 2009 at 11:40 AM Another well executed diamante. Terrific word choices and use of imagery to make the comparisons. Michael