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Dialogue With My Shadow

Me: "Have you ever pondered the shadows of why you exist?" Shadow: Because you wanted a friend who was not a gist? Me: I value your bond while aiming to be alone. Shadow: Yes, I hope you'd agree, you lack a hand sans bone? Me: You responded, but it was needless. Shadow: You wanted to vent without feeling helpless. Me: You appear most vivid in direct sunlight. Shadow: Yes, I believe that when I am having the most delight.   Me: You were in a never-ending need to talk. Shadow: You didn't stop going because you would walk. Me: When it's dark outside, I truly miss you. Shadow: It's when I'm with you the most. All is dark and true. Me: So many thoughts for this pondering ear. Shadow: But I'm only a shadow that can't even hear. Me: After barring my soul, I awaited a reply. Shadow: Again, I'm a shadow, so I can't say for sure why. Me: It is difficult to be on your own in this world. Shadow: Yet, in your company, I feel safe in my household.
Written: November 18, 2022 Dialogue Proficiency Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 11/19/2022 4:47:00 AM
i love poems about me and my shadow and how it disappears on cloudy days or at night. Hence I love this one. I wrote a poem about a baby giraffe and his shadow, and how he thought it was a new friend but could not understand why he sometimes disappeared. His name was Zipperty. Lasaad, sorry i have been scarce, i'm sure my friends, you definitely one of them understand, some doctors say I had Covid, others two anesthetics too close to one another, some say a burnout. I'm back now. HUGS Jenn.
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Date: 11/19/2022 2:04:00 AM
"Me: When it's dark outside, I truly miss you. Shadow: It's when I'm with you the most. All is dark and true"......There is much wisdom in this and it has made me think. An enjoyable dialogue, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/18/2022 8:19:00 PM
Such a charming dialogue between your shadow and yourself, Lasaad. It is both imaginative and captivating. Hope your weekend is nice, Evelyn
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Date: 11/18/2022 5:03:00 PM
And most enjoyable conversation between you and your shadow Sotto, if only shadows could talk, then it wouldn’t be lonely out on a walk… Belle
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Date: 11/18/2022 3:07:00 PM
This is brilliant my friend. Much enjoyed the dialogue you convey. Very original wonderment of thoughts.
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Date: 11/18/2022 2:32:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your couplets today, Lasaad. A good entry for the contest. It should rank high. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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