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Diablo

Diabolical in determination and deed, Angel with an angle, his weapon, a bevel-blade tongue wise and powerful, but with a major psychosis- he desired the worship of his Creator. Diablo, evil embodied, the devil Delusion? Illusion? I can be like God His resolution: raised leverage one-third of the angels rushed to his side fiendish fragment of his imagination He faltered, he failed; he fell. Derelict cast from heaven His die is cast; He will in due time receive his just due, a sinkhole, the pit of hell Death will die but he will not.
June 9, 2019 Kai Michael Neumann's contest: Eight Word Challenge Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/6/2019 6:33:00 PM
Your compelling poem is dramatic and uses the required words with dynamic artistry, Reason. The last line makes for a helluva great finale to a masterfully composed piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/3/2019 3:34:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent, especially in glorifying the Lord. God bless you.
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Date: 7/3/2019 7:49:00 AM
I welcome your response, it is a blessing in itself and may our Lord bless you in return. Thank you.
Date: 7/2/2019 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, RAP.
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Date: 7/2/2019 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, I welcome your reply, Line; I appreciate the comment.
Date: 7/2/2019 10:18:00 AM
Diabolically perfect poetry, Reason. Death will die but it will not. Congrats.
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Date: 7/2/2019 9:58:00 PM
thanks, Kurt, hopefully. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:24:00 AM
Well said! Congratulations on your third place win, Reason!
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Date: 7/2/2019 8:25:00 AM
thanks, Kim. I appreciate the comment.
Date: 7/2/2019 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. I am glad he 'wins' in the end. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 7/2/2019 8:27:00 AM
thanks, Kai Michael, Appreciate the third place "shiny" and your comment. Eternality is a feature of angels and humankind, depending on choices, choices, choices, followed by location, location, location. Have a great day.