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Dewdrops Draw Bows

The world globes itself in a drop of dew. ~ By Ralph Waldo Emerson ***********************
Pure dazzling spindly dawn prayers, Callow leaves shedding dews, The glow of the sun touched her tears, Sunrays caressed the tangled pears, With sparkling carpet of dew views, Cast on spider web hues. Dewdrops weaved as crowns from heaven, Gleam as glimpse of the dream, Show of sleek steam stems the garden, Till they pinch the bloom of lemon, Dawn dewdrops have a sturdy seem, without tricks or prime scheme. Tears are wincing as we sit here, We pray and wish on sky, Count blissful glee touching dew tear, Rain bears the love of those we cheer, Deft dewdrops are prized, so to say, From soul, tears fall today. In full bloom, rainclouds form, and burst God's fey stir each dripping, rain feeds life buds leaf and eas' thirst, On the nigh roar, sense feeling first, Let dewdrops soothe your heart aching, Stream reaches our meaning.
Written: June 19, 2022 Sponsored by: Angel L Villanueva Dewdrops Poetry Contest Rhyming verified on RhymeZone Syllables verified on HMS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 6/19/2022 9:49:00 AM
Beautiful and well constructed. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/19/2022 9:24:00 AM
Your amazing talent, I see here, Lasaad."The glow of the sun touched her tears, Sun rays caressed the tangled pears, With sparkling carpet of dew views, Cast shrewdly on spider web hues". I can see it all.....! A melange of colors and scenes strung together... ! A sure win, I guess! All the Best !
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Date: 6/19/2022 8:53:00 AM
I found this dewdrops theme difficult to work with, Lasaad, but you have done a splendid job with it. Best wishes for a top spot in Angel's contest.
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Date: 6/19/2022 7:17:00 AM
Sotto, wow, beautiful poem, image and music ! I love it so much and best of luck in the contest, for me it would be a winner for sure, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 6/19/2022 7:40:00 AM
Many, many thanks to you, Constance. I'm happy to hear that you enjoy it, and I want you to know how much I value your opinion. Kindest regards
Date: 6/19/2022 6:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through your words on hues of morning-- sparkling on dew drops. Beautiful, reflective.
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Date: 6/19/2022 7:41:00 AM
Many, many thanks to you, Vijay. I'm happy to hear that you enjoy it, and I want you to know how much I value your opinion.
Date: 6/19/2022 6:49:00 AM
Beautifully written Sotto :)
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Date: 6/19/2022 7:42:00 AM
Many, many thanks to you, Constance. I'm happy to hear that you enjoy it. Blessings
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