Dewdrops

Fog envelopes the forest
Leaving dewdrops behind
A fresh feel is in the air

Russell Sivey

Entrant into David Williams' "Twenty / Twenty" contest

2/23/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Congrats on another great win, Russell! Rhonda :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
K. Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:59 AM
AHh refreshing. Russel L) Enjoyed this one! Super congrats! :D
Taylor Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Congrats, Russ. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations on your fresh feeling poem, Russell and thanks for the placement in your color contest. I just finished reading all your winners and loved it!
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:02 PM
RUSSELL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Arowolo Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Wonderful and nice work,Russell.Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:28 PM
Russell, awesome words and a great visual. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Yes fog can sure do that mist too! Congrad's Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:03 AM
sweepinf success all the way, russell... congrats big tme..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:37 AM
congrats Russell on a beautifully constructed write exuding the beauty of nature after rainfall .. mesmerizing lines..luv..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Nice, congratulations Russell xx
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Russell. Love, Carol
Northeast Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 9:27 PM
This is really lovely Russell- I so love dewdrops, beautiful, best of luck in the contest, bren
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 9:07 PM
Nice use of twenty syllables. Good write Russell.
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