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Dewdrop

Topaz nose-ring on floral-brides, Detached like a wise sage; Touching and letting go, abides, Toward gentle flow of breeze slides; Though feels like bird in a gold cage, Within, no tinge of rage…! Dropped from up like tentative guest, Toward heaven staring; Yearning with eternal unrest, Searching and not finding its nest; Season's wrath modestly bearing, Exists never erring…! What does it tells the human race? Is it to leave the earth? Is it to trust on divine grace? And to fix our gaze on his face...? Is it to earnestly unearth, The mystical rebirth...? Whatsoever it might have meant, When sun rushed so fast paced; And rays wrapped with their golden tent, The dewdrop felt its life got spent; Heart in heavenly hands it placed, Grand-finale it faced…! 25 June 2022 Dewdrops Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Angel L Villanueva

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Date: 7/1/2022 8:56:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, your inspiring thoughts are wrapped in exquisite imagery. The magic of your pen shines. Congratulations for your excellent win in Angel’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/30/2022 5:46:00 AM
BIG congrats on your win, Christuraj--superbly done.
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Date: 6/29/2022 7:35:00 PM
A magnificent work of art Christuraj, dewdrops from the heart, wonderful. Congratulations on your win in Angel’s contest… Blessings, Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/29/2022 11:10:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/29/2022 10:38:00 AM
Chris, I thought I had commented when I first read this magical gem. :( It brought such sensations of loveliness and I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/29/2022 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/29/2022 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Creative/Beautiful" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/29/2022 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/25/2022 1:38:00 AM
Such a lovely and wonderfully thought out poem. The dew drop, from its grand opening as a nose ring sitting on floral brides to its grand finale of leaving the temporal abode into the abode of God, glistens brightly. Your poem, indeed is marvelously written and abounds in great imagery and florid imagination. All the Best in the contest, dear Chris!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/25/2022 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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