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[reprinted from my first poetry chapbook, "The Lady in the Pink Hat," Candor Press, 1969.]

A dewdrop is a dainty thing Upon a tender blade I like its crystal purilence Against the earth floor's jade It's such a proper finish touch To nature's awesome myriad I wonder if it's happenstance This pleasant cool-clear period? I think it not by chance occurred To glaze the slender leaf Was placed by nature's gentle hand To lighten her motif.

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Date: 5/15/2021 4:46:00 PM
A delicate poem that clarifies a dainty dewdrop. Adorable.
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Date: 5/15/2021 4:48:00 PM
One of my oldies, but goodies. Thanks so much for your visit, Caren.
Date: 5/14/2021 12:48:00 AM
Great poem. Shows your early capacity for verse.
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Date: 5/14/2021 8:07:00 AM
Thanks, Victor. Yep, I've been writing for a long, long time. Still hoping I've had something important to contribute.
Date: 5/13/2021 7:51:00 PM
I really like these 'Early Milt' pieces in which you explore a 'tiny subject.' Tickles my fancy and gets my toes wiggling. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 5/13/2021 8:58:00 PM
Ah, thanks, Gershon. That poem is probably fifty years old!!! LOL. Really, though, it wasn't that bad, eh?

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