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sweet kiss on my lips the morning sun tickles my neck caresses my cheek birds happily sing though I miss you i long for the days when we had each other i long for a past that was so tender your love was my strength now I carry on with what is left of me the loss of you meshed with my every fiber an ache that cries out in silence for its mate crossed over a distance insurmountable yet at times within my grasp AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on July 7, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND JUL 22 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 7/21/2021 11:18:00 PM
Heartache expressed for a lost love. Quote:your love was my strength now I carry on with what is left of me... Painful but beautifully expressed...Delice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, Delice ~
Date: 7/21/2021 5:04:00 PM
The soulful beauty and longing of your pen touches me deeply, Line. The depth and breadth of grief is keenly felt, especially in your last impactful line. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 11:39:00 PM
thank you very much, Susan ~
Date: 7/21/2021 7:06:00 AM
So nostalgic! This poem brings a feeling of sublime serenity that caresses a troubled soul. Breathtakingly beautiful. Your poems have a unique touch that heals a broken heart.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, JCB ~
Date: 7/21/2021 6:37:00 AM
We are in the same boat. My wife died four years ago and I still miss her.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 8:21:00 AM
poetry is a great way to pay tribute and get through this ~
Date: 7/21/2021 6:01:00 AM
This was beautiful Line. Those we keep in our hearts always will live forever
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:34:00 AM
absolutely, Chris ~ thank you
Date: 7/21/2021 5:41:00 AM
Lovely, Line! My Dad, in his grief, wonders how Mom would have handled being the one left behind. After 3 months he is doing a bit better. He knows how much he is loved by his children and he shows his love too. Sweet moments amidst our grief.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 5:45:00 AM
That's beautiful ~

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