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Dew Bubbles

moon drowns in dew drops  
meadow dawns with star sapphires 
bees blow dew bubbles 



Dec. 28, 2020
Hi-Ku (4) Poetry Contest 
Contest Sponsor: Brain Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 3:11:00 AM

Creative work for Brian's contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope this is the best year up to this point in your life and may each year following be awesome. Sara

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/31/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara, for this impressively sweet comment!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/28/2020 11:09:00 PM

'bees blow dew bubbles' is a line to picture, to let the imagination play with, and to ponder. Bravo, Newton! Happy New Year! :) gw

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/29/2020 4:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for this impressively beautiful comment and the wish!! Wish you a Very Happy New Year!!!