Devouring Presence

DEVOURING PRESENCE -- REPOST
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gray as it may sound, i pluck a morsel of star's daring light, this is where i want to be... in a stretch of spontaneous rhythm with my wired body clamped from the noise and haze of days' pages, pulling me into puppet strings of gods who never knew the magic of human sensibilities. if trees can entwine with their own lemon leaves so so sweetly, and hummingbirds hug the breeze in a stretch of flight luring a neutral night, i must be at the center of my constellation tiptoeing upon grasses with a lick of wine on the neck and a pirouette of some whirl of a dance.. i go thirsty for the fluid rawness of my need to simply be.
all rights reserved © ``` P.D's featured poem of the week contest ``` ` ` `featured poem on soup : 20 march 2011 ` ` ` nette onclaud
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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:17 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON YOUR TOP TEN WIN WITH THIS FEATURED POETRY SO FINE ....LUV..
Merryman Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Kim
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Amazing write here Nette...congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Wow!....into my favorites this goes Nette. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem filled with imaginative imagery.
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. nette
Nair Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great write
A   Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 2:18 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
Merritt Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Wow.....love the creative-essence in ur minds eye....in one word awesome!!!
A  Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:48 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
Piyush Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Truly Pictorious..for a while I went to the scenic Beauty...Great Work Nette..
Maverick Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 2:01 PM
enjoyed this write Nette, and thanks for all your great comments!
Neels Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in pd's contest ;) *hugs*
Phookan Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:29 PM
A beautiful first poem on soup nette. Such fine verse!! Congrats on your awesome win in pd's contest. love, gautami
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )
Taylor Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Excellent. Great job. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. nette
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol
Long Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 3:54 AM
nice job and congrats for your big win..Cory
A   Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:20 AM
Nette!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:34 PM
congrats Nette on another excellent win tonight in this contest ..brilliant my friend.. oh..
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Actually one of your very best poems in this first post ever. I really love it! congrats on your win, Nette!!
Foulk Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 5:11 PM
a very well written and enjoyable read.
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:59 AM
I will have to check out the contest and see what is going on...Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the kind review of my work.Sara
Neels Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Nette, I am so glad you decided to re post this one.. Quite a stunning write I especially love the constellation line.. Winning wishes your way for the contest ;) *hugs*
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