Devouring Presence

DEVOURING PRESENCE -- REPOST
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gray as it may sound, i pluck a morsel of star's daring light, this is where i want to be... in a stretch of spontaneous rhythm with my wired body clamped from the noise and haze of days' pages, pulling me into puppet strings of gods who never knew the magic of human sensibilities. if trees can entwine with their own lemon leaves so so sweetly, and hummingbirds hug the breeze in a stretch of flight luring a neutral night, i must be at the center of my constellation tiptoeing upon grasses with a lick of wine on the neck and a pirouette of some whirl of a dance.. i go thirsty for the fluid rawness of my need to simply be.
all rights reserved © ``` P.D's featured poem of the week contest ``` ` ` `featured poem on soup : 20 march 2011 ` ` ` nette onclaud

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:17:00 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON YOUR TOP TEN WIN WITH THIS FEATURED POETRY SO FINE ....LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Kim
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Date: 9/17/2011 11:47:00 AM
Amazing write here Nette...congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:31:00 AM
Wow!....into my favorites this goes Nette. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem filled with imaginative imagery.
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. nette
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great write
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:18:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:24:00 PM
Wow.....love the creative-essence in ur minds eye....in one word awesome!!!
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:48:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:12:00 PM
Truly Pictorious..for a while I went to the scenic Beauty...Great Work Nette..
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:01:00 PM
enjoyed this write Nette, and thanks for all your great comments!
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:27:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in pd's contest ;) *hugs*
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:29:00 PM
A beautiful first poem on soup nette. Such fine verse!! Congrats on your awesome win in pd's contest. love, gautami
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:34:00 AM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:31:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Excellent. Great job. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. nette
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 3:54:00 AM
nice job and congrats for your big win..Cory
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:20:00 AM
Nette!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:34:00 PM
congrats Nette on another excellent win tonight in this contest ..brilliant my friend.. oh..
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:40:00 PM
Actually one of your very best poems in this first post ever. I really love it! congrats on your win, Nette!!
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Date: 5/31/2011 5:11:00 PM
a very well written and enjoyable read.
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:59:00 AM
I will have to check out the contest and see what is going on...Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the kind review of my work.Sara
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:57:00 AM
Nette, I am so glad you decided to re post this one.. Quite a stunning write I especially love the constellation line.. Winning wishes your way for the contest ;) *hugs*
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