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Devour

          I'm a parched desert
           that longed for you
                 desperately
   while you were away for miles;
     now suddenly here you are!
    you've returned to me, at last.
    your smile and skin glistening 
           before my sore eyes.
                   hosanna!
          you're the cloudburst
   to heal the drought within me 
      and I'm more than thirsty!
     my true, I needn't fall down 
               on my knees
                   and beg 
          to devour you whole, 
                to engulf you 
           like a hungry abyss!



Date posted: 07/31/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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February 14, 2023 at 11:35 AM
This was one that I found to be really enjoyable. Congratulation on your win Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)
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February 14, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Sweet, sweet, sweet Edward - I love it. Congratulations on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
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